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PostPosted: Fri Aug 08, 2014 4:35 pm
Your Rank: Chunin
Ninja Class: Ninjutsu
Name of Jutsu: Earth Style: Thunder Current diversion
Rank of Jutsu:Chunin
Jutsu's Element: Earth
Jutsu Type:Ninjutsu
Do you want you Jutsu added to the Guild List:Yes
Description: The jutsu is similar to Gaara's earth style. Allowing the user to created a chakra static charge which distrupts lightning nature chakra. At the same time this jutsu may also be used as a net drawing lightning chakra into it like a weather rod.

This jutsu can disrupt jutsu of its user's class for five minutes, add five more minutes for each level under the user.



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RP Sample:
Voldo clashed with a shinobi who weilded a lightning blade. Having dodged as much as he could he began to become exausted.
Weaving handsigns as the ninja Faced Voldo. He noticed the shinobi was using lightning nature and this was a problem. Tapping into the earth around him he Claps his hands together and several spikes shoot up from the ground then land in various places. The small spikes charking with a current before arcing like tesla coils to the Shinobi with the lightning nature. upon the initial shock the static from the spikes seemed to distrupt the lightning nature chakra forcing his lightning blade to disipate.



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PostPosted: Sun Aug 10, 2014 7:22 pm
Your Rank: Gennin
Ninja Class: Genjutsu
Name of Jutsu: Quicksand
Rank of Jutsu: B rank
Jutsu's Element:
Jutsu Type:Genjutsu
Do you want you Jutsu added to the Guild List: No
Description: The caster forms a series of signs as another shinobi approaches them. Suddenly, the ground beneath the shinobi appears to liquefy and they slowly begin to sink into the ground more and more the longer they are trapped in the Genjutsu. Struggling also speeds up this process. However, they do stop once it reaches their neck and they are once again standing on solid ground.
RP Sample:


(If requested)


________________________________


Your Rank: Gennin
Ninja Class: Genjutsu
Name of Jutsu: Voices of Wrath
Rank of Jutsu: A rank
Jutsu's Element:
Jutsu Type:Genjutsu
Do you want you Jutsu added to the Guild List: No
Description: The caster of this Genjutsu first starts by pointing at the enemy nin, then once the enemy nin looks at them, the genjutsu is activated. Their head is then seemingly filled with hundreds of voices yelling at them, often criticizing them or laughing at them. This often confuses them or makes it seems like they are going insane, haunted by the spirits of the damned and those they have hurt. Can cause some form of paranoia.
RP Sample:


(If requested)


__________________________________

Your Rank: Gennin
Ninja Class: Genjutsu
Name of Jutsu: Supreme Sunlight
Rank of Jutsu: B rank
Jutsu's Element:
Jutsu Type:Genjutsu
Do you want you Jutsu added to the Guild List: No
Description: The caster forms a series of signs and most ninja in the area begin to feel as if the Sun is getting hotter and hotter. It also appears to be getting brighter, seeming to blind those who are not under some sort of cover of shade.
RP Sample:


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PostPosted: Mon Aug 11, 2014 8:27 am
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These two are Demon Techniques for Kokuo:
Your Rank: Chuunin
Ninja Class: Ninjutsu
Name of Jutsu: Suton: Eien no Suchīmu (Steam Release: Eternal Steam)
Rank of Jutsu: S
Jutsu's Element:N/A
Jutsu Type: Genjutsu
Do you want you Jutsu added to the Guild List:Nope, this is 3/4 of my Custom Kokuo jutsu
Description: To active this Genjutsu, the user releases a quickly expanding cloud of unharmful steam from his body. The steam expands at an extremely fast rate and, when it comes in contact with enemy skin, sucks them into the illusion.This can be used by the Jinchuuriki in any stage of Demon Release - whether that be the cloak (Stage 0) or whether Kokuo's completely free (Stage 3). The illusion is exactly this: The user disappears as the steam, which is now scalding and painful, continues to expand with incredible speed, covering any opponents in the area with its burning presence. While the user is in the steam, their vision will be obscured in all ways shapes and forms. Kirigakure no Jutsu doesn't work to see through this steam because it's a Genjutsu, however Doujutsu will still do the job. Not only will they not be able to see, but they will feel the same pain of being in the steam as if they actually were. They will feel their flesh burn and their body boil as steam cooks them alive. Because the steam is an illusion, there is no escape. If they run and run and keep running, the steam will follow them. During the performance of this Genjutsu, the user is covered in an actual cloud of steam that shrouds them as protection. This way, they can move, invisible, amongst the Genjutsu and attack their unknowing opponent.


Because this Genjutsu is so real, it would take a very long time before somebody realized they were even in an illusion, and by then they might have passed out from the pain of the fake burns. Kaiing out of it is possible just like any other Illusion, however its very unlikely that one would ever realize that they needed to do so unless they had a Doujutsu.

This Genjutsu drains twenty chakra every post that its active. Also, just for apparently-needed clarification, the user is still very tangible and CAN be hurt while using this Genjutsu. He is basically invisible to those under its influence, and does not become visible when attacking enemies, nor is he impossible to fight back against if he just stands there like an idiot and the enemy knows where he's attacking from. Most of the time, though, in the confusion of the fight, the victim is just being attacked by invisibility in a confusing wonderland of steam.
RP Sample:


(If requested)



Your Rank: Chuunin
Ninja Class: Ninjutsu
Name of Jutsu: Suton: Nigeba Nai (Steam Release: No Escape)
Rank of Jutsu: S
Jutsu's Element:N/A
Jutsu Type: Ninjutsu
Do you want you Jutsu added to the Guild List:Nope, this is the fourth and last of my custom Bijuu jutsu
Description: For this Ninjutsu to be used, the user must have seen the victim at least once before. A massive amount of especially dense steam is exhaled from the mouth. Once the user closes their mouth, it darts off towards whoever the user has targeted. This steam is extremely fast, equivalent to someone of level 9 Speed sprinting at full speed ahead. It chased after whoever was locked on, never ending until it attaches to their skin. Once it does, the steam surrounds them, slowing movement due to its denseness and burning them to death within seconds.

As the steam chases its victim, any sources of water (except for those that are in animal life or come from Suiton Jutsu that is of the same rank as this) will evaporate and join the chase. If the victim is in a field of grass, steam will constantly rise from the grass and grasp at their ankles, attempting to slow them. If they pass a tree, god help them, because a sizable clump of steam will shoot out (withering the tree) and attack them. All the while the original cloud is still chasing them.

Fuuton can and will blow away the steam as long as its at least a rank below (So, S-ranked, because all demon techniques are one rank up) or higher, however Fuuton cannot stop other sources of water from dissolving and chasing them. For the jutsu to be completely stopped, the original dense cloud of steam must be completely blown apart, which is certainly possible if one can force the handsigns out fast enough to use said technique.

The user is drained of 20 chakra every post the jutsu is active. Suiton Jutsu, just like all, below SS ranked are neutralized by this steam. Suiton specifically are also converted into more steam that joins the chase.
RP Sample:


(If requested)



Eien no Suchīmu: Approved
Nigeba Na: Broken. No. For me to approve this, the rank would have to decrease to B. It would not be able to track people by any means, and if it meets a suiton jutsu of the same rank or higher they ignore each other. Soz.
 
PostPosted: Mon Aug 11, 2014 8:30 am
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Your Rank: Chunin
Ninja Class: Ninjutsu
Name of Jutsu: Earth Style: Thunder Current diversion
Rank of Jutsu:Chunin
Jutsu's Element: Earth
Jutsu Type:Ninjutsu
Do you want you Jutsu added to the Guild List:Yes
Description: The jutsu is similar to Gaara's earth style. Allowing the user to created a chakra static charge which distrupts lightning nature chakra. At the same time this jutsu may also be used as a net drawing lightning chakra into it like a weather rod.

This jutsu can disrupt jutsu of its user's class for five minutes, add five more minutes for each level under the user.



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RP Sample:
Voldo clashed with a shinobi who weilded a lightning blade. Having dodged as much as he could he began to become exausted.
Weaving handsigns as the ninja Faced Voldo. He noticed the shinobi was using lightning nature and this was a problem. Tapping into the earth around him he Claps his hands together and several spikes shoot up from the ground then land in various places. The small spikes charking with a current before arcing like tesla coils to the Shinobi with the lightning nature. upon the initial shock the static from the spikes seemed to distrupt the lightning nature chakra forcing his lightning blade to disipate.



(If requested)


This can only last 2 posts. Edit and you're good.
 

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PostPosted: Mon Aug 11, 2014 8:35 am
Kashensu
Your Rank: Gennin
Ninja Class: Genjutsu
Name of Jutsu: Quicksand
Rank of Jutsu: B rank
Jutsu's Element:
Jutsu Type:Genjutsu
Do you want you Jutsu added to the Guild List: No
Description: The caster forms a series of signs as another shinobi approaches them. Suddenly, the ground beneath the shinobi appears to liquefy and they slowly begin to sink into the ground more and more the longer they are trapped in the Genjutsu. Struggling also speeds up this process. However, they do stop once it reaches their neck and they are once again standing on solid ground.
RP Sample:


(If requested)


________________________________


Your Rank: Gennin
Ninja Class: Genjutsu
Name of Jutsu: Voices of Wrath
Rank of Jutsu: A rank
Jutsu's Element:
Jutsu Type:Genjutsu
Do you want you Jutsu added to the Guild List: No
Description: The caster of this Genjutsu first starts by pointing at the enemy nin, then once the enemy nin looks at them, the genjutsu is activated. Their head is then seemingly filled with hundreds of voices yelling at them, often criticizing them or laughing at them. This often confuses them or makes it seems like they are going insane, haunted by the spirits of the damned and those they have hurt. Can cause some form of paranoia.
RP Sample:


(If requested)


__________________________________

Your Rank: Gennin
Ninja Class: Genjutsu
Name of Jutsu: Supreme Sunlight
Rank of Jutsu: B rank
Jutsu's Element:
Jutsu Type:Genjutsu
Do you want you Jutsu added to the Guild List: No
Description: The caster forms a series of signs and most ninja in the area begin to feel as if the Sun is getting hotter and hotter. It also appears to be getting brighter, seeming to blind those who are not under some sort of cover of shade.
RP Sample:


(If requested)


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PostPosted: Mon Aug 11, 2014 12:02 pm
SuperKawaiiOrpheus
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Your Rank: Chunin
Ninja Class: Ninjutsu
Name of Jutsu: Earth Style: Thunder Current diversion
Rank of Jutsu:Chunin
Jutsu's Element: Earth
Jutsu Type:Ninjutsu
Do you want you Jutsu added to the Guild List:Yes
Description: The jutsu is similar to Gaara's earth style. Allowing the user to created a chakra static charge which distrupts lightning nature chakra. At the same time this jutsu may also be used as a net drawing lightning chakra into it like a weather rod.

This jutsu can disrupt jutsu of its user's class for five minutes, add five more minutes for each level under the user.

(lasts 2 posts)


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RP Sample:
Voldo clashed with a shinobi who weilded a lightning blade. Having dodged as much as he could he began to become exausted.
Weaving handsigns as the ninja Faced Voldo. He noticed the shinobi was using lightning nature and this was a problem. Tapping into the earth around him he Claps his hands together and several spikes shoot up from the ground then land in various places. The small spikes charking with a current before arcing like tesla coils to the Shinobi with the lightning nature. upon the initial shock the static from the spikes seemed to distrupt the lightning nature chakra forcing his lightning blade to disipate.



(If requested)


This can only last 2 posts. Edit and you're good.


sorry i forgot to clarify that when i meant five minutes... i was refering to in game. so in reality it would have been 1 post... but 2 posts is a bonus so cool.  

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PostPosted: Mon Aug 11, 2014 1:14 pm
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These two are Demon Techniques for Kokuo:
Your Rank: Chuunin
Ninja Class: Ninjutsu
Name of Jutsu: Suton: Eien no Suchīmu (Steam Release: Eternal Steam)
Rank of Jutsu: S
Jutsu's Element:N/A
Jutsu Type: Genjutsu
Do you want you Jutsu added to the Guild List:Nope, this is 3/4 of my Custom Kokuo jutsu
Description: To active this Genjutsu, the user releases a quickly expanding cloud of unharmful steam from his body. The steam expands at an extremely fast rate and, when it comes in contact with enemy skin, sucks them into the illusion.This can be used by the Jinchuuriki in any stage of Demon Release - whether that be the cloak (Stage 0) or whether Kokuo's completely free (Stage 3). The illusion is exactly this: The user disappears as the steam, which is now scalding and painful, continues to expand with incredible speed, covering any opponents in the area with its burning presence. While the user is in the steam, their vision will be obscured in all ways shapes and forms. Kirigakure no Jutsu doesn't work to see through this steam because it's a Genjutsu, however Doujutsu will still do the job. Not only will they not be able to see, but they will feel the same pain of being in the steam as if they actually were. They will feel their flesh burn and their body boil as steam cooks them alive. Because the steam is an illusion, there is no escape. If they run and run and keep running, the steam will follow them. During the performance of this Genjutsu, the user is covered in an actual cloud of steam that shrouds them as protection. This way, they can move, invisible, amongst the Genjutsu and attack their unknowing opponent.


Because this Genjutsu is so real, it would take a very long time before somebody realized they were even in an illusion, and by then they might have passed out from the pain of the fake burns. Kaiing out of it is possible just like any other Illusion, however its very unlikely that one would ever realize that they needed to do so unless they had a Doujutsu.

This Genjutsu drains twenty chakra every post that its active. Also, just for apparently-needed clarification, the user is still very tangible and CAN be hurt while using this Genjutsu. He is basically invisible to those under its influence, and does not become visible when attacking enemies, nor is he impossible to fight back against if he just stands there like an idiot and the enemy knows where he's attacking from. Most of the time, though, in the confusion of the fight, the victim is just being attacked by invisibility in a confusing wonderland of steam.
RP Sample:


(If requested)



Your Rank: Chuunin
Ninja Class: Ninjutsu
Name of Jutsu: Suton: Nigeba Nai (Steam Release: No Escape)
Rank of Jutsu: S
Jutsu's Element:N/A
Jutsu Type: Ninjutsu
Do you want you Jutsu added to the Guild List:Nope, this is the fourth and last of my custom Bijuu jutsu
Description: For this Ninjutsu to be used, the user must have seen the victim at least once before. A massive amount of especially dense steam is exhaled from the mouth. Once the user closes their mouth, it darts off towards whoever the user has targeted. This steam is extremely fast, equivalent to someone of level 9 Speed sprinting at full speed ahead. It chased after whoever was locked on, never ending until it attaches to their skin. Once it does, the steam surrounds them, slowing movement due to its denseness and burning them to death within seconds.

As the steam chases its victim, any sources of water (except for those that are in animal life or come from Suiton Jutsu that is of the same rank as this) will evaporate and join the chase. If the victim is in a field of grass, steam will constantly rise from the grass and grasp at their ankles, attempting to slow them. If they pass a tree, god help them, because a sizable clump of steam will shoot out (withering the tree) and attack them. All the while the original cloud is still chasing them.

Fuuton can and will blow away the steam as long as its at least a rank below (So, S-ranked, because all demon techniques are one rank up) or higher, however Fuuton cannot stop other sources of water from dissolving and chasing them. For the jutsu to be completely stopped, the original dense cloud of steam must be completely blown apart, which is certainly possible if one can force the handsigns out fast enough to use said technique.

The user is drained of 20 chakra every post the jutsu is active. Suiton Jutsu, just like all, below the same rank as this jutsu are neutralized by this steam. Suiton specifically are also converted into more steam that joins the chase.
RP Sample:


(If requested)



Eien no Suchīmu: Approved
Nigeba Na: Broken. No. For me to approve this, the rank would have to decrease to B. It would not be able to track people by any means, and if it meets a suiton jutsu of the same rank or higher they ignore each other. Soz.

Removing the tracking literally kills the point of the entire jutsu. And I already specified that thats exactly what happens when it meets another suiton jutsu, because this jutsu is going to be in theory an SS rank due to demon boosts and the like. I've lowered the speed for it. What's inherently wrong with it now?  
PostPosted: Mon Aug 11, 2014 2:09 pm
City in Slumber
SuperKawaiiOrpheus
City in Slumber
These two are Demon Techniques for Kokuo:
Your Rank: Chuunin
Ninja Class: Ninjutsu
Name of Jutsu: Suton: Eien no Suchīmu (Steam Release: Eternal Steam)
Rank of Jutsu: S
Jutsu's Element:N/A
Jutsu Type: Genjutsu
Do you want you Jutsu added to the Guild List:Nope, this is 3/4 of my Custom Kokuo jutsu
Description: To active this Genjutsu, the user releases a quickly expanding cloud of unharmful steam from his body. The steam expands at an extremely fast rate and, when it comes in contact with enemy skin, sucks them into the illusion.This can be used by the Jinchuuriki in any stage of Demon Release - whether that be the cloak (Stage 0) or whether Kokuo's completely free (Stage 3). The illusion is exactly this: The user disappears as the steam, which is now scalding and painful, continues to expand with incredible speed, covering any opponents in the area with its burning presence. While the user is in the steam, their vision will be obscured in all ways shapes and forms. Kirigakure no Jutsu doesn't work to see through this steam because it's a Genjutsu, however Doujutsu will still do the job. Not only will they not be able to see, but they will feel the same pain of being in the steam as if they actually were. They will feel their flesh burn and their body boil as steam cooks them alive. Because the steam is an illusion, there is no escape. If they run and run and keep running, the steam will follow them. During the performance of this Genjutsu, the user is covered in an actual cloud of steam that shrouds them as protection. This way, they can move, invisible, amongst the Genjutsu and attack their unknowing opponent.


Because this Genjutsu is so real, it would take a very long time before somebody realized they were even in an illusion, and by then they might have passed out from the pain of the fake burns. Kaiing out of it is possible just like any other Illusion, however its very unlikely that one would ever realize that they needed to do so unless they had a Doujutsu.

This Genjutsu drains twenty chakra every post that its active. Also, just for apparently-needed clarification, the user is still very tangible and CAN be hurt while using this Genjutsu. He is basically invisible to those under its influence, and does not become visible when attacking enemies, nor is he impossible to fight back against if he just stands there like an idiot and the enemy knows where he's attacking from. Most of the time, though, in the confusion of the fight, the victim is just being attacked by invisibility in a confusing wonderland of steam.
RP Sample:


(If requested)



Your Rank: Chuunin
Ninja Class: Ninjutsu
Name of Jutsu: Suton: Nigeba Nai (Steam Release: No Escape)
Rank of Jutsu: S
Jutsu's Element:N/A
Jutsu Type: Ninjutsu
Do you want you Jutsu added to the Guild List:Nope, this is the fourth and last of my custom Bijuu jutsu
Description: For this Ninjutsu to be used, the user must have seen the victim at least once before. A massive amount of especially dense steam is exhaled from the mouth. Once the user closes their mouth, it darts off towards whoever the user has targeted. This steam is extremely fast, equivalent to someone of level 9 Speed sprinting at full speed ahead. It chased after whoever was locked on, never ending until it attaches to their skin. Once it does, the steam surrounds them, slowing movement due to its denseness and burning them to death within seconds.

As the steam chases its victim, any sources of water (except for those that are in animal life or come from Suiton Jutsu that is of the same rank as this) will evaporate and join the chase. If the victim is in a field of grass, steam will constantly rise from the grass and grasp at their ankles, attempting to slow them. If they pass a tree, god help them, because a sizable clump of steam will shoot out (withering the tree) and attack them. All the while the original cloud is still chasing them.

Fuuton can and will blow away the steam as long as its at least a rank below (So, S-ranked, because all demon techniques are one rank up) or higher, however Fuuton cannot stop other sources of water from dissolving and chasing them. For the jutsu to be completely stopped, the original dense cloud of steam must be completely blown apart, which is certainly possible if one can force the handsigns out fast enough to use said technique.

The user is drained of 20 chakra every post the jutsu is active. Suiton Jutsu, just like all, below the same rank as this jutsu are neutralized by this steam. Suiton specifically are also converted into more steam that joins the chase.
RP Sample:


(If requested)



Eien no Suchīmu: Approved
Nigeba Na: Broken. No. For me to approve this, the rank would have to decrease to B. It would not be able to track people by any means, and if it meets a suiton jutsu of the same rank or higher they ignore each other. Soz.

Removing the tracking literally kills the point of the entire jutsu. And I already specified that thats exactly what happens when it meets another suiton jutsu, because this jutsu is going to be in theory an SS rank due to demon boosts and the like. I've lowered the speed for it. What's inherently wrong with it now?


If you can get it to SS rank through boosts then fine. But the fact stands that it's base rank has to be B. If you lower the speed to that of someone with 3 speed then I'll let the tracking go but honestly, a cloud that can just infinitely follow someone and only be dispatched by Fuuton is broken. Changes need to be made. And I misread the the suiton addendum My apologies.  

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PostPosted: Mon Aug 11, 2014 4:46 pm
SuperKawaiiOrpheus
City in Slumber
SuperKawaiiOrpheus
City in Slumber
These two are Demon Techniques for Kokuo:
Your Rank: Chuunin
Ninja Class: Ninjutsu
Name of Jutsu: Suton: Eien no Suchīmu (Steam Release: Eternal Steam)
Rank of Jutsu: S
Jutsu's Element:N/A
Jutsu Type: Genjutsu
Do you want you Jutsu added to the Guild List:Nope, this is 3/4 of my Custom Kokuo jutsu
Description: To active this Genjutsu, the user releases a quickly expanding cloud of unharmful steam from his body. The steam expands at an extremely fast rate and, when it comes in contact with enemy skin, sucks them into the illusion.This can be used by the Jinchuuriki in any stage of Demon Release - whether that be the cloak (Stage 0) or whether Kokuo's completely free (Stage 3). The illusion is exactly this: The user disappears as the steam, which is now scalding and painful, continues to expand with incredible speed, covering any opponents in the area with its burning presence. While the user is in the steam, their vision will be obscured in all ways shapes and forms. Kirigakure no Jutsu doesn't work to see through this steam because it's a Genjutsu, however Doujutsu will still do the job. Not only will they not be able to see, but they will feel the same pain of being in the steam as if they actually were. They will feel their flesh burn and their body boil as steam cooks them alive. Because the steam is an illusion, there is no escape. If they run and run and keep running, the steam will follow them. During the performance of this Genjutsu, the user is covered in an actual cloud of steam that shrouds them as protection. This way, they can move, invisible, amongst the Genjutsu and attack their unknowing opponent.


Because this Genjutsu is so real, it would take a very long time before somebody realized they were even in an illusion, and by then they might have passed out from the pain of the fake burns. Kaiing out of it is possible just like any other Illusion, however its very unlikely that one would ever realize that they needed to do so unless they had a Doujutsu.

This Genjutsu drains twenty chakra every post that its active. Also, just for apparently-needed clarification, the user is still very tangible and CAN be hurt while using this Genjutsu. He is basically invisible to those under its influence, and does not become visible when attacking enemies, nor is he impossible to fight back against if he just stands there like an idiot and the enemy knows where he's attacking from. Most of the time, though, in the confusion of the fight, the victim is just being attacked by invisibility in a confusing wonderland of steam.
RP Sample:


(If requested)



Your Rank: Chuunin
Ninja Class: Ninjutsu
Name of Jutsu: Suton: Nigeba Nai (Steam Release: No Escape)
Rank of Jutsu: S
Jutsu's Element:N/A
Jutsu Type: Ninjutsu
Do you want you Jutsu added to the Guild List:Nope, this is the fourth and last of my custom Bijuu jutsu
Description: For this Ninjutsu to be used, the user must have seen the victim at least once before. A massive amount of especially dense steam is exhaled from the mouth. Once the user closes their mouth, it darts off towards whoever the user has targeted. This steam is extremely fast, equivalent to someone of level 9 Speed sprinting at full speed ahead. It chased after whoever was locked on, never ending until it attaches to their skin. Once it does, the steam surrounds them, slowing movement due to its denseness and burning them to death within seconds.

As the steam chases its victim, any sources of water (except for those that are in animal life or come from Suiton Jutsu that is of the same rank as this) will evaporate and join the chase. If the victim is in a field of grass, steam will constantly rise from the grass and grasp at their ankles, attempting to slow them. If they pass a tree, god help them, because a sizable clump of steam will shoot out (withering the tree) and attack them. All the while the original cloud is still chasing them.

Fuuton can and will blow away the steam as long as its at least a rank below (So, S-ranked, because all demon techniques are one rank up) or higher, however Fuuton cannot stop other sources of water from dissolving and chasing them. For the jutsu to be completely stopped, the original dense cloud of steam must be completely blown apart, which is certainly possible if one can force the handsigns out fast enough to use said technique. Jutsu of the same rank as it can still neutralize the cloud.

The user is drained of 20 chakra every post the jutsu is active. Suiton Jutsu, just like all, below the same rank as this jutsu are neutralized by this steam. Suiton specifically are also converted into more steam that joins the chase.
RP Sample:


(If requested)



Eien no Suchīmu: Approved
Nigeba Na: Broken. No. For me to approve this, the rank would have to decrease to B. It would not be able to track people by any means, and if it meets a suiton jutsu of the same rank or higher they ignore each other. Soz.

Removing the tracking literally kills the point of the entire jutsu. And I already specified that thats exactly what happens when it meets another suiton jutsu, because this jutsu is going to be in theory an SS rank due to demon boosts and the like. I've lowered the speed for it. What's inherently wrong with it now?


If you can get it to SS rank through boosts then fine. But the fact stands that it's base rank has to be B. If you lower the speed to that of someone with 3 speed then I'll let the tracking go but honestly, a cloud that can just infinitely follow someone and only be dispatched by Fuuton is broken. Changes need to be made. And I misread the the suiton addendum My apologies.
Its cool, I understand now that I wasn't clear in my description of what stops the jutsu. Jutsu of the same rank as it will still neutralize, its just that Fuuton can be a rank below and do the same thing, therefore making it more useful. I didnt mean for it to sound like only Fuuton could stop it. Just like any other jutsu, it's neutralized by fellow SS ninjutsu.  
PostPosted: Tue Aug 12, 2014 9:32 am
Your Rank: genin
Ninja Class:puppet
Name of Jutsu: Clay hands exploding illusion
Rank of Jutsu:C-A
Jutsu's Element:
Jutsu Type:Genjutsu/ninjutsu
Do you want you Jutsu added to the Guild List:No
Description: The user first molds clay into any shape or form he deems fit for the situation. Next taking the clay form in his hand he will imbue the clay with a genjutsu of his choosing. At the time of detonation even if an opponent isn't caught within the blast as long as they look at the explosion they will be trapped within the genjutsu the user imbued within. (No matter how much exploding clay is used only one genjutsu can be used at a time. As well if an opponent closes their eyes the genjutsu part of this technique will fail. The rank of this jutsu depends on the type of clay being used as well as the rank of the genjutsu.
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ChaosDuo

Beloved Friend


___youwillknownihilism
Captain

PostPosted: Tue Aug 12, 2014 3:02 pm
ChaosDuo
Your Rank: genin
Ninja Class:puppet
Name of Jutsu: Clay hands exploding illusion
Rank of Jutsu:C-A
Jutsu's Element:
Jutsu Type:Genjutsu/ninjutsu
Do you want you Jutsu added to the Guild List:No
Description: The user first molds clay into any shape or form he deems fit for the situation. Next taking the clay form in his hand he will imbue the clay with a genjutsu of his choosing. At the time of detonation even if an opponent isn't caught within the blast as long as they look at the explosion they will be trapped within the genjutsu the user imbued within. (No matter how much exploding clay is used only one genjutsu can be used at a time. As well if an opponent closes their eyes the genjutsu part of this technique will fail. The rank of this jutsu depends on the type of clay being used as well as the rank of the genjutsu.
RP Sample:


(If requested)

Considering how many things are related to genjutsu and the fact that clay hands aren't even genjutsu related I'm gonna recommend this not get through. Seems a lotte op to me  
PostPosted: Tue Aug 12, 2014 5:25 pm
Your Rank: Jounin
Ninja Class: Assassin
Name of Jutsu: Yamikonton: Black dragon
Rank of Jutsu: Jounin
Jutsu's Element:Darkness...or chaos
Jutsu Type: Ninjutsu
Do you want you Jutsu added to the Guild List: No
Description: This jutsu is about precision and timing. When hand seals are made the user must aim the hand or arm with the mark of chaos on it towards the target. From the mark a long and large streak is formed from the hand with a head of a dragon. It can turn but it can turn comepletely. if the person evades the the side and forward, they escaped the dragon and you lost the amount of chakra for nothing.
RP Sample:
((If requested))

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Valiant Depression

Thirteenth Teenager


Yuki Miojin

PostPosted: Tue Aug 12, 2014 6:31 pm
Yuki Miojin
Valentine Valtieri
Yuki Miojin


Sample, please. Show me how and what you intend it to do. Also, show me every scenario you think you're going to use it in besides straight up combat.


(Phone post, apologies for any mispelling)

RP SAMPLE 1 Straight up combat:

Shinya had missed yet again as Taisei flipped forward and now stood away from him. The way Taisei had dodged was highly unorthodox, but it amazed him how flexible he was. He went with the flow of things and used different styles in order to adjust to the situation. This let Shinya to realize that in order to land a hit on Taisei, he needed to strike faster. His body was already moving as fast as it would allow him to, he had already reached his limit in terms of speed and strength.

Shinya took an extra step as he came across with his sword and spun his body completely before coming to a complete stop after his attack. Upon coming to a stop, Taisei would see Shinya's sword raised parallel to his head with his right hand stretched outward. His back leg was bent 70 percent while his front was slightly outstretched and bent by 30 percent. His right was steadying his sword as he used to take aim at his target. He took a crouching stance as he panted slightly, a wolf ready to leap at his prey. He was already growing out of breath by this point due to him moving at the max speed his body could take him.

Pushing off with his foot, Shinya launched himself towards Taisei a third time. This time, it was a straight shot at Taisei. With his right hand still held outward, Shinya brought his right hand back and launched his left arm forward with a thrust of the blade. The momentum of his right arm pulling back and his left arm pulling forward increased the speed of his thrust if only slightly. With this, he was able to attack at a speed faster than his body could actually go even if it was only by a little bit. Every bit counted however against an opponent like Taesei. The tip of his sword aimed to strike at the right side of Taisei's chest to incapacitate his right shoulder from being of any use.

RP SAMPLE 2 Assassination:

His target was on the other side of the room, of this Shinya knew. He had to strike fast before his prey would know of his presence, and therefor call for reinforcements. Although he was a Samurai, he needed to proceed with this assassination in order to protect the village. Staring at the wooden door, Shinya unsheathed his sword quietly and held it with his left hand, grasping at the very bottom of the hilt.

Shinya brought his left foot back along with the entire left side of his body and bent his knees ever so. His back leg was bent much more than his front leg. As he placed his left arm parallel to his shoulders, Shinya brought his right up to stead his blade and take aim. Taking a step forward, Shinya attacked.

Shinya's target was unaware of the presence in the other room as he casually was sipping tea. He turned suddenly as the door to his room exploded. Shinya's thrust was powerful as his attack exploded through the door and was now heading straight to his prey. Shards of wood flew threw the air as the blade neared his target at speeds he could not even fathom. Not only was Shinya naturally fast, but the motion of his body made the attack faster. The blade plunged into his target's heart before he realized that he was actually being attacked.


Can you please re-take a look at my custom? I never got a response as to yay or nay  
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