[BLiTZ]
A saying of mine or poem call it whatever u want:
I'm a shadow,a nomad,a rogue.I disappear from places and reappear in others,searching.Searching for a purpose.My purpose to live and when I find it I shall fulfill that purpose,that reason, to live.
Please rate from a 1 to 10.
1 being the worst and 10 being the best ok.
Please be honest.
Dark yet lacking
You need a wider range of wording
For example: instead of saying:
Quote:
I disappear from places and reappear in others,searching.
...you might say:
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My very essence moves with the ethereal winds, shifting my spirit from the limbo that binds us, to the planes beyond, where I shall find my true purpose
The Joker...
...The Thief