Poetry by a new member

[BrokenxXxWings]

All away,
It went away.
The happiness that made me,
It's gone away.

If I could bring it back
Oh, I would.
Just to breathe,
To focus,
Remake you.

You are my new,
New happiness.
Took me out of the storm.
Into your arms.

I can't explain my security,
maybe you can.

All I do is fail.
How do you put up with me?
Who am I?

True to what I believe,
I live in temptation,
Also in regret, for what I've done.

When will I learn?
I am eroaded by ignorance.

Wishing you would destroy me,
Instead of bring out the best of me.
But you say you love me.






















so... tell me what you think... please  

[simpleticsoul]

i like it..except for the away part. that was repetive and almost made me not want to read the rest of the poem