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sexyninjaangelofdarkness

PostPosted: Mon Aug 27, 2007 11:56 pm
you told me you loved me,
you tolf me i was the only one, the first one. yours.

what am i?
am i something you use?
something ypu can just pick and cast away like nothing?

i thought i loved you
i thought you loved me

i guess i was wrong
i hate you
but yet i cant help but still love you

you hurt me
yet i go back for more

listing to you and your promisses
which only turn out as lies!

you told me....
you told me....

what am i?
nothing?  
PostPosted: Wed Sep 05, 2007 2:19 am
To be honest, it doesn't seem very original to me. Maybe work on your imagery and diversify your wording?  

Zhiege

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