Poem I wrote for my fiancee

[Itchy_Ichigo_12321]

All I wanna Say is...

I hope that someday my

Lover will see how she's the
Only one for me and she's so
Very sweet and kind and
Everything to me. Though

Years may pass the
Only thing I want
Until the day I die is her.

Near or far
I'll love her till the day I
Can't go on living cause
Only death could part us, though our
Love will
Endure....Forever and always.


Yeah, I wrote that for my fiancee and she thought it was very sweet. So what do you all think?  

[hitmeibleed]

1-10?uh, 3..no offense.. whee  

[The Raining Soul]

I think it's sweet.  

[Itchy_Ichigo_12321]

EmoJirachi

I think it's sweet.

Well thank you. I thought so too. The poem isn't rhymed or metered, but it's a free form that is structured off of one phrase that answers the title's statement/question. When I gave her the poem, I used caligraphy to write it, took me like 3 hours using the old style pens and inkwells!  

[The Raining Soul]

Itchy_Ichigo_12321

EmoJirachi

I think it's sweet.

Well thank you. I thought so too. The poem isn't rhymed or metered, but it's a free form that is structured off of one phrase that answers the title's statement/question. When I gave her the poem, I used caligraphy to write it, took me like 3 hours using the old style pens and inkwells!

Cool.  

[walk like thunder]

its sweet
i did a poem like that for a bf before
sweetness does not include talent haha
but i bet your fiancee felt loved!