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emos_will_rule21
Crew

PostPosted: Fri Nov 09, 2007 8:29 pm
Can one be swallowed
by a lover's grasp?
Can one fall victim
to a love meant to last?

Can I be the one
to be taken in?
Will I be the chosen
to live with your sin?

Blissfully unaware
strewn before a grave.
You picked up my peices
and told me I was brave..

You made me feel together
when I always fell apart.
You made me happy
right from the start.

I let go for a moment
you never left my side.
I never wanted to love again
but you made sure I tried.

Let me ask you something
Now, do you beleive?
What you and I
can some to achieve?

If I jusr hang on
and you wait a bit longer.
We'll prove everyone wrong
and comeout even stronger.

All the other people
not they can see.
ASnd they want us to fail
because none of them can be.

Forget ehat they say
becasue none of it's true.
You brought me back toether
when I was blue.

You showed me I can love again
you made me forget my past.
Because now we're in something
we both know will last.

So, can I ask one last question?
Why did you leave me once before.
And why should I give you another chance
when you left me heartbroken at your door.


Hope you enjoyed it.
PostPosted: Fri Dec 21, 2007 9:22 am
i liked it  

Justin_the_Vampire


xPastelRainbows
Captain

PostPosted: Fri Dec 21, 2007 4:06 pm
Yeah, same here ^.^ It was pretty good  
PostPosted: Sat Dec 22, 2007 12:34 pm
Me likey! Nice rhyme scheme.  

-PaReLiSiTy_RaInS-


emos_will_rule21
Crew

PostPosted: Sat Dec 22, 2007 9:14 pm
Thank you everyone.
I'm glad you like it.  
PostPosted: Sun Jun 21, 2009 10:44 pm
that was great!!! mrgreen NICE JOB!  

iplaybass867
Crew


x-iiCandy Condom

PostPosted: Sat Oct 10, 2009 12:27 pm
that was.. amazing and the rhymes remind me of my ex love ^^ lovely poetry btw  
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