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Ace of spades12

PostPosted: Fri Nov 23, 2007 5:21 am
Ok so im writeing a poem for a very special girl and here it is


My love for you is like the stars in the sky watching down on the earth.

its always there shineing bright

and even when its not apparent and times are dark

it breaks through the darkness

and glows bright with beauty

only hopeing to be noticed by you

because just like the stars have fallen to earth

i have fallen for you



can you tell me what you think about it if you have any tweeks to it Pm me your idea please and thank you!  
PostPosted: Sat Nov 24, 2007 1:45 pm
looks good but u need to get a dictionary.....or a spellchecker... sweatdrop .....  

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