The concluding fight (a bit early)

[Xahmen]

My spinal cord creaked, then gave as she twisted her wrist.
Numbness like an intense cold spread through my body.
Then I was watching her floor slide away from me, her eyes never left mine as she tossed me almost effortlessly through her ceiling and into the bathroom above.

The back of my head broke a chunk off the underside of Christine's marble sink.

Blood flowed away from me in channels, sliding with the grooves in between the checkered tiles.
Black.


Actually concludes from a different point of view  

[Voxxx]

You had a nice strong ending. Realistic imagery. Very gory.  

[Sors]

Ouch!
I'm not sure I like it with just the word Black at the end though.

 

[KirbyVictorious]

It's got amazing imagery and style, but your stuff always leaves me asking so many questions. Where? Why? Who?