the cutters lullabye

[Vintage Mannequin]

Hosoi-Chan_Angel

-Isel-

Soviet Mudkipz

you should say bore instead of borne
and WRITE SOMETHING HAPPY

I wrote a happy song once.

Except it was more like a "happy raep tiem" song, does that count? Schadenfreude is still happiness.

Isel are you speaking german?

isnt that german for like happiness in the misfortune of others..?
something similar... idk >_<  

[penguin_on_caffine]

Hosoi-Chan_Angel

x_missmurder666_x

this is an awsum song (kind messed up)

go to sleep, close you eyes
and dream of broken butterflies
that tore thier wings against a thorn
you know the pain that they have
borne.

Silver metal shines so bright
scarlet blood feels so right
dream of the blood trickling down
wake up just before you drown

moonlight shining off your tears
as you bleed out your worst fears
so tonight when you start to cry
whisper the cutters lullaby

hushabye baby you almost dead
you have no pulse and your pillow is red
your family hates you and your friends let you bleed
Sleep tight with a knife 'cause its all that you need

rockabye baby broken and scarred
you didnt know life was this hard
time to end the pain that you hid so well
And down will come baby straight to hell


x_me.. just me_x

that's the best lullabye i've ever heard! do you have a tune for it? if u do then u could probably record it and put it on your profile. either way i want that song! domokun

Yeah, the words are very lyrical. Although I could never get my poems to match any of my music...  

[xXemoliciousXx13]

Otxanus Xanaphy

NickelbackNerd

I love the poem! I think it's really, really, awesome! That's one of the best poems I've read on gaia. biggrin

I agree.

yes me too  

[divin_amour]

that was good. it was great. it could use a bit of editing but overall it was good.  

[Ghost1124]

That poem was one of the best poems I've ever read.  

[MargieMe]

Otxanus Xanaphy

NickelbackNerd

I love the poem! I think it's really, really, awesome! That's one of the best poems I've read on gaia. biggrin

I agree.

me too, its fantastic! and truth be told i sang it to myself instead of reading it mrgreen  

[LoversRequiem]

Beautiful poem. I bet a lot of people could relate to that feeling of pain.  

[chick_wit_da_face]

this isnt hers you guys. its an actual song. google it.  

[Frog Apocalypse]

i like it, it really speaks to me  

[xLiliths Childx]

omg this is really good!!
I can totally relate...e.xcept the dying part but still...
Very well done! ^ ^