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The Splendiferous Rufu

PostPosted: Tue Dec 04, 2007 4:49 pm
    Mkay, wrote this on the train home from school today. I was insanely happy and cheerful (still am, really), so I vomited my feelings onto my laptop, like always. <3 I'm aware it doesn't reeeeally make a ton of sense, and that there are a few sentences that are missing verbs, but I reallyreally liked the way this one came out. so here. <3
    ...yes, 'synced' is a word.

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    There has never been anything but love. The carnal desire, first – but later, as emotions ballooned and reasons dwindled – the infatuation, the smile from seeing his face, the tenderness from seeing hers. That endless feeling – that forever is now, and what is now will be forever. The exactitude with which they synced, and that pleasurable pressure both had – in the gut when they were apart, and in the lips and hips when they were together. The intensity of their eyes as both pairs roved the other, and the ease with which their lips parted at the sight. Their passion, discreetly displayed; a quick massage of the lips to the neck, and the meeting of tongues in a corner. Never would either push, or deny a touch the other needed. They are together, in mind – and as often as possible, in body – one’s insanity is incomplete without the other’s.

<3RUFU
 
PostPosted: Thu Dec 06, 2007 5:59 pm
While I didn't care much for the drama-ness of the the last line, I agree with how "down to earth" you define love.
Is "exactitude" a word?  

Xahmen
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The Splendiferous Rufu

PostPosted: Fri Dec 07, 2007 10:17 pm
    Yeah... I meant to go for a little lighter than that. Not clinical insanity, just intense quirkiness.
    Yeah, it is. x3

<3RUFU
 
PostPosted: Sat Dec 08, 2007 10:04 am
Aw. <3

Exactitude! ^^  

KirbyVictorious


The Splendiferous Rufu

PostPosted: Sat Dec 08, 2007 8:17 pm
I am a major fan of that word. xD  
PostPosted: Sat Dec 08, 2007 8:20 pm
Rufu, I luff yoo for that. Exactitude. I'm going to go say that to someone, right now. heart  

Voxxx


The Splendiferous Rufu

PostPosted: Sat Dec 08, 2007 8:29 pm
Voxxx
Rufu, I luff yoo for that. Exactitude. I'm going to go say that to someone, right now. heart
DO IT. xD heart  
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