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Sors

PostPosted: Sat Dec 22, 2007 7:05 pm
Your eyes again… Based on the TV show Bones, no need to have ever watched that show though.

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I ran my hand against the metal once more.
Solid, so very solid.
I tore away a little more of the fabric. Some soft cotton fell against my cheek.
I moved my hand up into the fluffy padding of coffin’s interior wall. I felt along the edges, the sides.
I came to know every inch of it that I could reach.
I slammed my hands against the metal.
Again.
Again.
Again.
I hadn’t suffocated yet.
How long had I been in here?
I hadn’t suffocated yet… There had to be some sort of opening to the outside.
I rolled over and clawed at the padding beneath me.
I came to metal once more.
I felt, reached, strained, waited, yelled, waited, reached, yelled.
Cried into the remnants of the little pillow.
I shred the pillow into pieces.
I pulled every inch of padding apart.
I felt along every inch of the coffin for even the slightest hint of a breeze.
I hadn’t suffocated yet.
But the air was becoming stuffy.
How long had I been in here?
Days?
Hours?
Days?
Minutes?
Days…
I yelled again.
Again.
Again.
Again.
I felt tired.
I closed my eyes.
Her image came to me in a flash. Her smile. Her pout.
Her eyes.
“I’ll never look into your eyes again.” I said softly.
“I love you Bones. I love you, I love you, Iloveyou, ILOVEYOU!”
I screamed and beat upon the side of the coffin until my hands and arms were bloody.
She would find me someday.
She would know.
I had fought, and fought to look into her eyes one last time.

…The air was tight. It felt thick. I close my eyes.
“I love you Temperance.”  
PostPosted: Sat Dec 22, 2007 7:20 pm
The line "I love you Bones" seemed really weird...
Were you refering to the show?  

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KirbyVictorious

PostPosted: Sat Dec 22, 2007 9:52 pm
*confused*

Why would he be buried alive/

Bones, Temperance...who?  
PostPosted: Sun Dec 23, 2007 8:38 pm
KirbyVictorious
*confused*

Why would he be buried alive/

Bones, Temperance...who?

Okay... xD
Well Dr. Temperance Brennan and Booth (guy in the coffin) work on cases together in a similar way to Molder and Skully on the X-files. So they have this hot sexual tension thing going on.
Anyway Bones is the name of the show as well as being Booth's nickname for Temperance.
He's locked in a coffin because the serial killers on the show are always doing weird s**t like that to get back at them.
3nodding

... I guess watching the show a few times helps.

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Sors


The Splendiferous Rufu

PostPosted: Sun Dec 23, 2007 10:14 pm
    Still, I don't think you need to explain. The situation is self-explanatory: he's in a coffin. You don't need to know why, but you bet your a** he's in there. xD
    Uh. So yeah, I think the use of the word "Bones" as a name was confusing.
    Or, a flashback of some sort could be useful in exposing the nickname and other things. So yeah.

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PostPosted: Wed Dec 26, 2007 7:29 pm
I love that show! I can't wait until the new season starts! Anywho, back to the peice, I loved it, it was reaslly sweet and he probably does feel that way...he better! After they kissed and all, I won't go into it here!  

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Voxxx

PostPosted: Fri Dec 28, 2007 8:47 pm
Gah, I'm behind. Sorry for not comment-whoring yet. Not that you need it. Loved this. It needs not, nor bears for, any harping.  
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