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It is January...
  -sigh-
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NovaKing

PostPosted: Mon Jan 07, 2008 5:24 pm
Tak-Jak
No such luck Nova.
If I use a poll, it shall be biased.


sad

wink

-shrug-  
PostPosted: Mon Jan 07, 2008 6:56 pm
I like this poem (since it does seem to be a poem). The rhythm is really nice and consistent, a bit lazy (but that's how i like it).

I have to disagree, though: winter rules. summer sucks. it's just too dang hot. at least in the winter I can see my breath xp  

in the flicker.


NovaKing

PostPosted: Mon Jan 07, 2008 7:01 pm
in the flicker.
I like this poem (since it does seem to be a poem). The rhythm is really nice and consistent, a bit lazy (but that's how i like it).

I have to disagree, though: winter rules. summer sucks. it's just too dang hot. at least in the winter I can see my breath xp



-high five for winter-

-but I grew up in the desert and my affection for the cold is purely aesthetic-  
PostPosted: Mon Jan 07, 2008 7:08 pm
Hmm, I guess I came off wrong.
I love wrinter.. just I dont really know.  

Tak-Jak
Vice Captain


in the flicker.

PostPosted: Mon Jan 07, 2008 7:12 pm
see, that's what I thought in the first stanza (yay winter) but by the time i got to the end where it's all like "I long for March" and all that jazz...I wasn't so sure.  
PostPosted: Mon Jan 07, 2008 7:19 pm
Love

So the year's done with!
(love me for ever!)
All march begun with,
April's endeavor:
may-wreaths that bound me
june needs must sever;
now snows fall round me,
quenching june's fever-
(love me for ever!)

ROBERT BROWNING  

NovaKing


Tak-Jak
Vice Captain

PostPosted: Mon Jan 07, 2008 7:28 pm
Hmm.. I cannot say. The state of mind in which I wrote this has long passed, due to the fact mid-term exams are next week, and my teachers managed to stress me out the first day back from break.  
PostPosted: Mon Jan 07, 2008 7:41 pm
Tak-Jak
Hmm.. I cannot say. The state of mind in which I wrote this has long passed, due to the fact mid-term exams are next week, and my teachers managed to stress me out the first day back from break.


next week?

that's ridiculous!

why?  

in the flicker.


Tak-Jak
Vice Captain

PostPosted: Mon Jan 07, 2008 7:44 pm
Because the state commission is stupid and ridiculous.
-shoots them all-  
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