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Tak-Jak
Vice Captain

PostPosted: Wed Feb 06, 2008 7:47 pm
I owe you thanks today, breeze.
You cooled the excrutiating warmth from the sun's rays.

I saw you today, breeze.
You were evident in the ripples of the water, behind the mass sway of cattails.

I learned from you today, breeze.
You moved swiftly, without rush, and like you I'd like to do that too.

So please stay, I feel quite comfortable and the shade is a distance away.
 
PostPosted: Wed Feb 06, 2008 8:00 pm
oooooooooooohhh.

It was so surreal and beautiful. I can't correct a thing, as usual. <33333 I loved it.  

KirbyVictorious


Tak-Jak
Vice Captain

PostPosted: Wed Feb 06, 2008 8:03 pm
3nodding  
PostPosted: Thu Feb 07, 2008 3:55 pm
Very pretty tak-jak ^_^  

NovaKing


Oukow

PostPosted: Thu Feb 07, 2008 4:31 pm
Awe...! >w< Makes me wish summer would come sooner.

Breeze was over here too! Not today, but yesterday! I'm gunna thank him/her too when I see breeze! =3
 
PostPosted: Thu Feb 07, 2008 5:09 pm
Breeze is overrated.

Shade ftw talk2hand  

BlackHawkGS


Tak-Jak
Vice Captain

PostPosted: Thu Feb 07, 2008 5:18 pm
Hawk, you know nothing of running barefoot through wet grass, do you?  
PostPosted: Thu Feb 07, 2008 5:26 pm
BlackHawkGS
Breeze is overrated.

Shade ftw talk2hand


XD  

NovaKing


BlackHawkGS

PostPosted: Thu Feb 07, 2008 8:15 pm
Tak-Jak
Hawk, you know nothing of running barefoot through wet grass, do you?


Oh yes I do. And I ALWAYS run through the wet grass that was just mowed. So what happens? I get a bunch of wet grass pieces stuck to my feet and it takes FOREVER to get every piece off.

Shoes ftw talk2hand  
PostPosted: Fri Feb 08, 2008 7:25 pm
Hawk, I reject you. whee  

Tak-Jak
Vice Captain


Galladonsfire

PostPosted: Sat Feb 09, 2008 6:47 pm
This poem reeks of true Freedom.....something I want one day too....

Very Nice smile  
PostPosted: Sat Feb 09, 2008 9:22 pm
To get true freedom, all you need to do is take a step out the door and don't stop.  

Tak-Jak
Vice Captain


KirbyVictorious

PostPosted: Sun Feb 10, 2008 6:50 am
Unless you're afraid of the dark. stare  
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