Immolation

[[ In Nomine Satanas ]]

"I wrote this story so many days ago...
and the words kept falling onto pages..."

It's amazing how little people actually perceive. So much goes on around them and yet they never bother to open their eyes and just see. It's sad really but what do I care? It just serves my purpose...

Like the fabled wolf, I vigilantly spied on my intended prey with a new zeal that had escaped me in the past few years... That was before I realized the truth about myself, about her, and about life in general...

"How could I know that you would take my breath away?
And how could I know one kiss would change everything?"

Back then, I was too shy to approach her directly, yet I was too interested to avert my eyes. She appeared to me a paradigm of human perfection, a goddess (if such beings exist) incarnate.

To this day I don't know what possessed me to pursue her as though I was her shadow, but that one simple impulsive decision entwined our lives forever...

"And I feel immortal, and I want to make you feel the same
So stand by me, as we immolate...
We can burn in each other's arms..."

 

[KirbyVictorious]

What is immolate?

I like this. I can kinda sorta relate to it. It's awesome.

I love you. heart  

[NovaKing]

KirbyVictorious

What is immolate?

I like this. I can kinda sorta relate to it. It's awesome.

I love you. heart

to kill off in sacrifice, especially by burning.  

[KirbyVictorious]

Oh.

...

Ohhhhhh.  

[[ In Nomine Satanas ]]

Thanks, I just had a random urge to right this so I am slowly but surely working on this story... bit by bit...  

[KirbyVictorious]

Sexy.  

[[ In Nomine Satanas ]]

So I'd love some more comments. Kirby as always was great but... more!!!  

[Oukow]

KirbyVictorious

Sexy.

Agreed.  

[Sors]

Burning with desire. Hehee, nice story I love your word choice. But I think you should add the word "carnal" in there. Seems fitting, or at least if you write more of this.  

[[ In Nomine Satanas ]]

This is a continuation of one story I'm working on. So far it includes Kissing Angels and Burning Wings, Set Me Free (Your Heaven's A Lie) and The Rising Of A Dead Man's Chest...

Tak, where ist thou wisdom? I yearn for thee.  

[[ In Nomine Satanas ]]

So I would really love a few more comments if anyone cares to take a gander at this...  

[Galladonsfire]

I can say I agree and disagree from the personal experiance perspective, being as that I give more faith in humans to find out for themselves their flaws. Beside that point of persepctive exellent story I reeeally want to hear more about it! Also kinda makes me wonder his reasoning in this whole story.... thus justifying the reason that you need to WRITE MOOOORE!!!!! xp