dark poetry

[slayer898]

As I have lost the one I love
The light in me is dying
Darkness now infects my soul
My mind clouded in shadow
My heart covered in blackness
As my mind try’s to fight off the demons
My light grows weak and small
Until my light is gone my mind is mine
And I remember things of my past
The happy times the times of light
With my love in my arms
And the broken heart she left me with
Now the light is gone
And my mind is blank
No longer mine
My heart is black
My soul infected by darkness
A new man is born
Void of all emotion
Feeling
Thought
And light……

well this is a new one tell me what you think  

[trainerghallan]

i think thats to real if i lost my girl i would have anything left other then the drive to make her life beter for the fect that i known what true happyness and for that my life is hers because i can die happy knowing this other then that i like your work sorry to here you had a brake up  

[slayer898]

trainerghallan

i think thats to real if i lost my girl i would have anything left other then the drive to make her life beter for the fect that i known what true happyness and for that my life is hers because i can die happy knowing this other then that i like your work sorry to here you had a brake up

no dude i dident lose her im still her kitten yay! KITTY!!! it is new because i revised it i wrote this when i lost my firt gf she was a b***h though man it was the first time we broke up then got back together the next day it was like this every week untill i broke up with her i got tired of that s**t my new "owner" is a saint in her own little way and she got me cat ears and a tail KITTY!  

[trainerghallan]

ok  

[slayer898]

but thanx man i like positive feedback on my work  

[trainerghallan]

slayer898

but thanx man i like positive feedback on my work

for sure man i feel it dude im all about art stuff  

[slayer898]

as am i but only art that speaks to me ya know what i mean?  

[trainerghallan]

i do i do pip pip cherio good show good show old boy  

[slayer898]

hahahahaha rofl  

[slayer898]

well we just broke up an hour ago it was not very rough but im free now yay!!!!!!  

[trainerghallan]

nice!  

[slayer898]

yes and now i have a bf who loves me and i love him yay!  

[ocalhoun]

slayer898

well this is a new one tell me what you think

Reading that while listening (by random chance) to Cannon in D, I've had an inspiration for a new poem...

Now I have two I have to write! And not a single word of either chosen... Not good!

Anyway, thanks for the inspiration.  

[The Corrupted Renamon]

Lovely work~♥

 

[slayer898]

check out my new stuff in the topic i started yesterday