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PaintOnSilence

PostPosted: Tue Apr 08, 2008 7:51 pm
This is just a bunch of lyrics from my band, I'll post more as we make more songs. Go ahead and read through them, tell me what you like, etc, etc.

We're a deathcore band, sorry if some of the stuff I describe parts with sound odd, if you have questions, just ask me. If you ask me, I'd more likely answer a PM than a post in the thread.

Our pages:
Official ALS web page
Official ALS myspace page

The First Song..., This song has a Name
This is the first verse
It's supposed to be heavy
I'm going to scream
Really High Like This(-done in bree/pig squeals)
Then is a mini-breakdown
Followed by
The second verse

[growl]

I'm going to growl insecsent stuff like-
I will eat your dead fetus just for fun
aborting Manbearpig for another breakdown
Then I'll do the stupid chorus

This is my brutal chorus
That I did not feel like writing
I'm going to end it now
For the sake of your
SAN-I-TY

Maybe if I convulse and shake my head around a lot
You'll get more into the song
But now
It comes to an end
And I'll bring back my boring chorus

This is my brutal chorus
That I did not feel like writing
I'm going to end it now
For the sake of your sanity

This is my brutal chorus
That I did not feel like writing
I'm going to end it now
For the sake of your sanity

SANITY

[breeeee]

Neckbreaker
You know you want to
HEADBANG
Throw your f*****g
Neck out
You know you want to
HEADBANG
Throw your f*****g
Neck out
You know you want to
HEADBANG
Throw your f*****g
Neck out
You know you want to
HEADBANG
Throw your f*****g
Neck out

MOSH [x6]

You know you want to-

(we enter the breakdown here)
NECK BREAKER

BREAK YOUR NECKS

HEADBANG
(exit breakdown)

You know you want to
HEADBANG
Throw your f*****g
Neck out
You know you want to
HEADBANG
Throw your f*****g
Neck out
You know you want to
HEADBANG
Throw your f*****g
Neck out
You know you want to
HEADBANG
Throw your f*****g
Neck out

MOSH [x4]

Throw your necks out

MOSH [x2]

Chapter Eins: Life of the Party
Perched
On a darkened doorstep, fighting back my conscience
The cold sensation sets in

Controlling my mind,
The hour arrives
Unknowing guests praty in inosence

MY BLOOD BATH BEGINS

Gutting their loins
Disemboweling intestines
Severing their heads
Ripping flesh from the bone
My carnage ensues,
But my thirst only grows

Finding a pregnant survivor, thoughts surge through me
Carving my way into her womb and aborting the fetal child,
She screams bloody murder!
Only to be silenced by twin daggers through her eyes and to her brain

Gutting their loins
Disemboweling intestines
Severing their heads
Ripping flesh from the bone
My carnage ensues,
But my thirst only grows

The fetus lay still,
Submerged in the placenta!
Ripping it out for consumption
Brings ease to my mind.
It's under-developed limbs
Crush between my f*****g teeth!

Gutting their loins
Disemboweling intestines
Severing their heads
Ripping flesh from the bone
My carnage ensues,
But my thirst only grows

Perched on a darkened door step
Fighting back my conscience
The cold sensation sets in-

Chapter Zwei: Cemetery Snack
Our fetus monger walk into the nearest corner store
Maiming the clerk, he appeases his eyes
Delusions of grandeur over take him

Upon his exit
he sees a young fertilized whore
A smile grows on his face

Raving mad
With an unquenched hunger
Feeding must begin

This young whore has suffered emensely
At late she was raped
Thrown out of her house
Now she scowers the streets
Pregnant & stressed

He knocks her in the head
Drapes her over his shoulder
Dragging her to the nearest cemetery
After slaughtering our whore
He consumes her embryotic offspring

Raving mad
With an unquenched hunger
Feeding must begin

And the feeding was good
 
PostPosted: Wed Apr 09, 2008 6:38 pm
I need to ask you to bleep out the f-word. I have absolutely no time to do it myself, but if you don't do it by tomorrow, I will.  

penandpaper67
Captain


PaintOnSilence

PostPosted: Wed Apr 09, 2008 7:49 pm
Oh, sorry.
I'll get right on that.

though on a side note, not an argument or anything:
Gaia provides a censorship tool, which one can activate in their account settings. If one were to not want to see vulgarity/profanity (whichever you prefer to call it) on the internet, a place of free speech and expression, they should turn on that censorship tool.
Just saying.  
PostPosted: Thu Apr 10, 2008 2:33 pm
I know, but the f-word is technically R-rated (yes, I know, it's weird). And plus, it's typically more polite to bleep out any swear words. I just want to keep it PG-13, even without a censorship tool. Your lyrics are...different. Some of them are pretty weird, but I could see how they would sound good.  

penandpaper67
Captain


PaintOnSilence

PostPosted: Thu Apr 10, 2008 7:20 pm
Alright, I really don't agree with censorship entirely, but I'll do it for the guild.

and yes, they are out there, but hey, this is what goes on in mymind when I get entirely bored.., also, I have an unnatrual obsession with death and serial killers. That adds to my inspriation and thoughts.  
PostPosted: Sat Apr 12, 2008 7:59 am
0_0 I think these lyrics will definately make good heavy metal songs. Yeah...sorry I don't know too much about this kind of music but I think the first one seemed pretty cool!  

5 to midnight
Crew


PaintOnSilence

PostPosted: Sat Apr 12, 2008 11:55 am
lol, thank you, thank you.

check out our myspace if you want to hear a low quality version of the first song. We're working with a new bassis and once he's got it down, we'll work on a better mastered version.  
PostPosted: Mon Aug 25, 2008 6:33 am
I noticed you seem to like writing about pregnancy and fetuses a lot. XD  

Ravitacus


PaintOnSilence

PostPosted: Sat Sep 20, 2008 5:03 pm
It was metaphorical, lol.

I was comparing pregnancy or a fertile body to the music industry where the fetus i the music it lets out. I've grown tired of labels letting out bands that sound alike in many ways. So i strted a band in a style that doesn't get listenend to quite often to put my thoughts out there for others to hear..., if they could, lol.

Sadly though problems arose and that band is gone, but I'm in a couple other bands now and I'll post some stuff from them later on after we have complete recordings and the such.  
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