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XGamerRichy

PostPosted: Sat Apr 26, 2008 7:52 am
Right, I has my title, The Colour of Mushrooms, I has my poster for it:
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I would just like some pointers on the plot for the next twenty episodes, because I've kind of hit a brick wall with where to go, here's the first twenty episodes and the titles of the fifteen episodes I need help with:
Series 1
Episode 1: Will you marry me Peach?
Mario asks Peach to marry her, but she gets kidnapped by Bowser and Bowser Jr. and taken into Space. Mario goes out to save her and succeeds. Peach then accepts and then the two have a celebration. Luigi and Yoshi are there. They party for a bit until Peach finds something shocking in Mario’s cap.

Episode 2: Two-Timed
Peach finds a picture with a love heart border of Rosalina, she slaps Mario and yells at him, she feels utterly humiliated and leaves. Luigi and Yoshi looked shocked, and Mario pretends that Rosalina planted it there.
Peach comes back for revenge, she battles Mario but eventually gets knocked out.
When she starts to come round, she hears a sort of wedding music playing, she opens her eyes and screams.

Episode 3: The Wedding
The priest (Pit) asks Mario if he wants Peach to be his wife, he says yes. Pit asks Peach if she wants Mario to be her husband, she says no, and slaps Mario calling him a no good dirt lying two timing cheating b*****d, and then tosses him out of the arena.
Pit looks at Peach and asks her what that was all about, and she says that Mario knocked her out, brought her here and he’d cheated on her, Pit nods and agrees that she was right in doing what she did and then leaves.
Peach goes back to her castle and looks around dejectedly, suddenly Mario appears and he attacks her from behind.

Episode 4: The Final Straw
Peach retaliates and Mario begs for her forgiveness, she says that if he can beat her in a race then maybe she’ll take him back.
The two race and Peach wins by miles, Mario decides to knock her out again and nearly succeeds, but Pit arrives just in time to stop him, Peach and Pit fight Mario off, but Bowser arrives and tries to kidnap Peach. He brainwashes Pit and Pit attacks.

Episode 5: Snake I’m gonna kill you!
Peach screams and runs away from the attacking party. Little does she realise that all of the boys have been brainwashed by Snake. A flashback occurs showing Snake get the Lip’s Stick and hit them all with it, the effects only last for a week, and when the scene changes it shows Snake hitting the other boys.
When Peach returns she finds Snake attacking Mario, she says she’ll kill Snake, and she goes in for the kill.

Episode 6: Peach, it’s over
Peach defeats Snake and he runs off, Mario who just survived the attack tells Peach that it is over, since there are too many women in his life, and he can’t choose just one. Peach runs off in tears.

When she returns to the castle, she finds it under attack from Link. Not knowing who Link is, she battles him and defeats him. Then Zelda shows up and attacks Peach, the battle ensues, and then, there is a big explosion.

Episode 7: Peach’s Revenge
Peach survives the attack, but Zelda is defeated, Peach decides it’s time to defeat all of the brainwashed blokes, but she is sent back in time by a strange attack and has to race for her life as Baby Peach. She finishes the final circuit and is returned to normal, she goes to Snake’s headquarters and challenges him.

Episode 8: Who the hell are you?
Peach and Snake battle, throwing comments at each other for all of the match, then, a huge beam appears and a blue thing attacks them. Snake runs off leaving Peach, and some other characters to fight it.

Episode 9: Football?
After the battle, Bowser attacks, sending Peach into a football arena, she faces Bowser and eventually wins. Then Bowser sends her into the Olympic Games.

Episode 10: Is this the end?

After Peach wins the Olympics, she returns to her world and goes to her castle. Mario appears and asks her if she wants to marry him. She says no, and walks away.

Series 2
Episode 11: A Shadow in the Night
Peach is walking home when something starts following her in the darkness, she tricks it and finds out that it is a Jigglypuff. The Jigglypuff attacks and Peach is forced to retaliate, a battle ensues and Jigglypuff is eventually defeated, then Peach discovers that some one is trying to take her life, and that person is closer than she thinks.

Episode 12: The Phone Calls
Mario calls Link, to say that Peach said no. Link is annoyed since he is in the middle of a battle with Ganon, and he hangs up on Mario. Mario then calls Kirby, Kirby is annoyed since he is in the middle of a fight with Dedede, Kirby yells at Mario and hangs up. Mario then calls Fox and the same thing happens. Then Mario calls, DK, Yoshi, Pikachu, Ness, Captain Falcon, Luigi, Marth and Sonic. They all hang up. Mario then calls Bowser, who actually talks to Mario… Bowser then says that it was Mario’s fault for being a d**k and that Peach should marry him. Mario hangs up.

Episode 13: Unlucky for Some
Peach arrives at the Mushroom Kingdom where she finds Mario sobbing. She talks to him and explains why she rejected the proposal, suddenly, Wario turns up and kidnaps Peach, she yells abuse at him and makes a reference to the Subspace Emissary mode. Peach eventually breaks free and defeats Wario to escape. She is then caught by Ganondorf, she beats up Ganondorf and then talks to the screen, she says that the number 13 is unlucky for her and she has no luck. However she has better luck than Zelda.

Episode 14: LUCARIO!
Peach walks into the Pokemon Stadium to visit Pokemon Trainer, because she needs to ask him about karts because Pokemon Trainer seems to know about that sort of stuff, but he’s not there, instead Pikachu and Lucario are battling. They see Peach and stop, Lucario says that Peach is disrupting a tournament, but Peach just asks where Pokemon Trainer is. Lucario tells her that he is in the other stadium. Lucario escorts Peach to the other stadium where she talks to Pokemon Trainer. Suddenly a flash a light separates the three characters, Peach yells for Lucario but nobody answers. She screams and the episode ends.

Episode 15: Pokemon Battle!
Peach wakes up in Poketopia, she yells at the creator and says that she’s getting dimension sickness, then she ends up in a battle against a girl called Daisy. Both of them look similar and Peach suspects that the girl called Daisy is Princess Daisy. The two battle, and Peach wins by a landslide and she is sent back to the normal dimension. Peach then says that she is going to take control of her life and not let some stupid director make her life hell.

Episode 16: The Princess’ Guide to Brawl
Peach starts talking saying that this is her guide to Super Smash Bros Brawl. The book has lovely red letters on the front that say “Don’t Wuss Out”. It opens and Peach starts reading out the entries, the first lot is on the characters. She laughs at parts. She only misses out one entry, hers, solely because she didn’t want to talk about herself. After all the characters are covered, she says a little about next time and closes the book.

Episode 17: Restaurant at the End of the Mushroom Kingdom
The Princess’ Guide to Brawl is seen, and then it opens up, Peach says that this time she’s gonna let the guide speak for itself, and let it talk about the stages in Brawl. Eventually she closes it. She visits the restaurant at the end of the Mushroom Kingdom and watches the spectacle, whilst protecting herself from the huge amount of shadow clones that decided to start attacking her, she defeats them all and opens the book again, it says bye and it is closed again.

Episode 18: Life, the Universe and Mushrooms
Peach appears on the screen, it’s just an image and Peach speaks, she says that the machine died, so they’re having to use images to create the movie. She laughs, “oh well, it means we can do what we want without you spying on us.” She giggles and then suddenly the picture fades into the real life. Peach groans, she has a go at the director and then starts talking about the meaning of life. She asks why we are in this world only to fight, can’t we have tea parties instead? She asks why do people enjoy using us to beat up our friends and she just keeps asking, then she asks what is the answer to Life, the Universe and Mushrooms. Mario walks by, “42”.

Episode 19: So Long and thanks for all the Mushrooms
Bowser walks into view, he looks at the screen, “So long, and thanks for all the mushrooms” he mutters before leaving. Peach appears, she asks what that was all about and sighs. We see the guide and Peach opens it, it talks about the assist trophies and eventually Peach shuts it.

Episode 20: Mostly Harmless?!
The guide appears and opens up. An new entry is found. It is on Peach. It is very simple and has only four words in the description. Mostly Harmless by Mario. Peach yells and we hear the sounds of her pummelling Mario. She appears on screen and smiles. The entry is seen again. The description is erased and replaced by five words. Incredibly harmful when pissed off. Peach laughs and a music video comes on. Then the credits roll.


Series 3
Episode 1: The Fellowship of the Princess

The new series opens with Peach, Rosalina and Daisy having a race, Peach wins and Rosalina and Daisy leave in second and third. The scene flips back to Brawl and Peach is seen dancing with Zelda next to her (The earlier battle seems to have not happened, or they both forgot about it) they have a bit of a chat, and then the screen turns black and Petey Pirhana is standing behind them. They defeat him, and find some other people, and they set off together to defeat the enemies lurking about, and so begins the Fellowship of the Princess. They get through about 10 rooms of the Great Maze before the episode finishes.

Episode 2: The Two Flowers
When the episode starts, we see Peach and Zelda in a room that is filled with trophies, the trophies of Petey Pirhana, Pit, Link, Yoshi, Diddy Kong, Duon, Snake, Mr Game & Watch, Meta Knight, Ness, Porky, Captain Falcon, Olimar and Donkey Kong aren’t there, which is explained by Peach when she figures out where they are. They get through about 10 rooms, before the episode finishes, everyone talking to each other throughout it. They battle Samus, Pikachu, Rob, Ridley and Bowser before the battle ends.

Episode 3: Return of the Queen
When the episode starts, the team are standing in the doorway to the end of the maze, they go through the door and find the blue menace who attacked earlier in the series, Peach and Zelda take on Tabuu and defeat him with the help of all of those who go before them. Afterwards, they are sent to Final Destination, where Peach tells Zelda that the Queen must come forth and take control of the Smash Bros universe, then, the two fight over who it should be, Peach just wins. Turns out, she was Queen of the universe after all…

Episode 4: Peach Wars : The Big Fat Menace
Wario laughs at the screen and rubs his big fat backside in it, he says that he is going to take over the universe and starts gathering followers. He then goes in to attack Peach. The two fight and Daisy ‘dies’ similar to how Qui-Gon Jin dies (Wario stabs her with the beam sword). Peach then defeats Wario and the fat sod runs off yelling that he will be back. Then there’s a big festival, where Donkey Kong receives a special orb, with Diddy in tow reminiscent of the ending of the Phantom Menace.

Episode 5: Peach Wars : Attack of the Losers
Wario opens the episode showing a mass of Captain Falcon clones. All of the Falcon clones go to different female characters and all of them get owned with different variations of a similar technique. Literally, each Captain Falcon goes up to the girls and says “Show me your moves!”, they all reply, “STALKER!” then use their moves. The final scene is a massive fight between each character and a Falcon Clone, all of the clones get owned and Peach defeats Wario again.

Then here are the ones I need help with:
Series 3
Episode 6: Peach Wars : Revenge of the b***h

Episode 7: Peach Wars : A New Rope

Episode 8: Peach Wars : The Pyre Strikes Back

Episode 9: Peach Wars : Return of the Peach

Episode 10: Back to the Peach


Series 4

Episode 11: Princess Peach and the Raisers of the Lost Mushrooms

Episode 12: Princess Peach and the Temple of Boom

Episode 13: Princess Peach and the Last Masquerade

Episode 14: Princess Peach and the Kingdom of the Crystal Bull

Episode 15: The Colour of Mushrooms

Episode 16: Happy Peach

Episode 17: Minute Mushrooms

Episode 18: Mushroom Kingdom Musical

Episode 19: Mushrooms

Episode 20: Enchanted


Now, I do want a slug fest at some point between Link, Zelda, Mario and Peach, and I know what I want to do with that, but everything else is just like what can I do..... sweatdrop

Help!
 
PostPosted: Sat Apr 26, 2008 12:32 pm
Now, the ones I need help with are there to pay homage to some great films and books and stuff, so, I thought I'd put what they pay homage to....

Series 3

Episode 6: Peach Wars : Revenge of the b***h (Star Wars: Revenge of the Sith by George Lucas)

Episode 7: Peach Wars : A New Rope (Star Wars: A New Hope by George Lucas)

Episode 8: Peach Wars : The Pyre Strikes Back (Star Wars: The Empire Strikes Back by George Lucas)

Episode 9: Peach Wars : Return of the Peach (Star Wars: Return of the Jedi by George Lucas)

Episode 10: Back to the Peach (Back to the Future)

Series 4

Episode 11: Princess Peach and the Raisers of the Lost Mushrooms (Indiana Jones and the Raiders of the Lost Ark by George Lucas)

Episode 12: Princess Peach and the Temple of Boom (Indiana Jones and the Temple of Doom by George Lucas)

Episode 13: Princess Peach and the Last Masquerade (Indiana Jones and the Last Crusade by George Lucas)

Episode 14: Princess Peach and the Kingdom of the Crystal Bull (Indiana Jones and the Kingdom of the Crystal Skulls by George Lucas)

Episode 15: The Colour of Mushrooms (The Colour of Magic by Terry Pratchett)

Episode 16: Happy Peach (Happy Feet)

Episode 17: Minute Mushrooms (Minute Men by Disney Channel)

Episode 18: Mushroom Kingdom Musical (High School Musical by Disney Channel)

Episode 19: Mushrooms (Hairspray)

Episode 20: Enchanted (Enchanted by Disney)

Hope that helps, not that they have to have anything to do with the originals....
 

XGamerRichy


XGamerRichy

PostPosted: Thu May 01, 2008 9:32 am
Can somebody please help me, I need help with the plotlines..... sweatdrop  
PostPosted: Thu May 01, 2008 1:16 pm
I'm sorry, but I really have no time for critiquing/helping people out with writing until the end of the school year. It takes enough time to manage the guild and post once in a while, let along read the stuff in the writing subforum. mrgreen I wish I had more time for that though... I always feel bad when nobody critiques stuff.  

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XGamerRichy

PostPosted: Fri May 02, 2008 3:38 am
penandpaper67
I'm sorry, but I really have no time for critiquing/helping people out with writing until the end of the school year. It takes enough time to manage the guild and post once in a while, let along read the stuff in the writing subforum. mrgreen I wish I had more time for that though... I always feel bad when nobody critiques stuff.

Thanks for popping in anyway, le sigh, oh well. I'm sure some inspiration will come.  
PostPosted: Sat May 31, 2008 7:06 am
Ok, I've got another five episodes, now please can somebody help?!  

XGamerRichy


5 to midnight
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PostPosted: Sun Jun 01, 2008 10:12 am
For the Back to the Peach one you could do something where one of the characters( say mario for instance) falls into a time warp and ends up in an era where Daisy or someone else is the princess. Then the episode could be about how he gets back to the future, back to Peach.

Happy Peach could be where Peach decides to have a dance off (for some reason or another...) and the contest ends in a brawl between the two finalists.

Then for Mushroom Kingdom Musical Peach and the others could somehow get sucked into this alternate universe where everything they do is like a musical. (So when they fight they sort of sing too...and dance...)

You could probably do the big 'slug fest' durring the episodes based off of Star Wars considering that whole series is basically about a giant battle.
I hope this kinda helps...and doesn't sound stupid...  
PostPosted: Sun Jun 01, 2008 12:33 pm
blulife28
For the Back to the Peach one you could do something where one of the characters( say mario for instance) falls into a time warp and ends up in an era where Daisy or someone else is the princess. Then the episode could be about how he gets back to the future, back to Peach.

Happy Peach could be where Peach decides to have a dance off (for some reason or another...) and the contest ends in a brawl between the two finalists.

Then for Mushroom Kingdom Musical Peach and the others could somehow get sucked into this alternate universe where everything they do is like a musical. (So when they fight they sort of sing too...and dance...)

You could probably do the big 'slug fest' durring the episodes based off of Star Wars considering that whole series is basically about a giant battle.
I hope this kinda helps...and doesn't sound stupid...


GENIUS! Thank you!!!!!!!  

XGamerRichy

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