Some Poems.....

[Kevin Sohma]

Since I like to write I'd thought I'd share some of my poems. So here's one I wrote recently. I would also appreciate some feedback on them. (thanks in advanced) ^_^

I Told You Not To Follow
by: Kevin

Your controlling ways smother me
Always clinging to my very being
Trying to make you the only one I see.
I try to create space
So we both my breathe
But still you insist always being face-to-face
I try to lock myself away
To relieve all your grief
I told you not to follow
But you do anyway
Now you see the blade
My arm covered with blood
The blade slowly receding
Now you never leave
That stare of sympithetic concern
It's because of you I'm like this
Guess you'll never learn  

[xXsneezleXx]

well its not to bad but it wasent very clear at some parts i thought...  

[Kevin Sohma]

Yeah I wrote that when I dated this real clingy chick and basicly it tells how she turned me into a depressed, cutter for awhile. Here's another poem. I've posted it in another place but I haven't gotten any response on it so here you go.

That Dark Kiss Goodnight

You told me you'd never leave.
I almost tricked myslef in believing you.
These empty words I wished were true.
Your cold fingers wringing my heart.
Your whispered lies lost in the wind.
Many late nights we thought would last.
Fade into nothing but a distant past.
Lie to me once more.
Tell me this will never end.
Tell me you still love me.
We both stand at the door.
Don't smile at me and say everything will be alright.
To you I beg you remember,
That last dark kiss goodnight.

Basicly this goes out to the girl who ended up turning me emo. ^_^