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  maybe. we'll see. :U
  hur hur, option four. :B
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PandaEnlightenment
Captain

PostPosted: Wed Jul 16, 2008 8:31 am
Upon the release of the new beta writing arena, I thought it would be a good idea to make a thread devoted to members of the guild who submit works. So if you want us to take a look at something you submitted and rate it, post here. c;

Here's the link to the beta arena, in case you missed the announcement:
www.gaiaonline.com/arena

Anyhoo, I'll be the first. ^^; I've already submitted two poems, and one is on the second page of popular works! Yaay! So go look me up.
My popular poem is called "Violence is not the answer." Written for my dearest. c;
 
PostPosted: Wed Jul 16, 2008 12:43 pm
I didn't see it. gonk  

Rad Disease
Vice Captain


PandaEnlightenment
Captain

PostPosted: Wed Jul 16, 2008 1:50 pm
Yeah, I know. ._. it slipped out because a few people voted lower than four. xD oh well. such is life.
just search my username in the arena. x3
OH NO! YOU AREN'T WEARING YOUR EMO GLASSES. D:
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PostPosted: Thu Jul 17, 2008 11:37 am
WAIT! I CAN EXPLAIN! They didn't look good with what I was trying to do, but I still have them! I'm SORRY!  

Rad Disease
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Rad Disease
Vice Captain

PostPosted: Thu Jul 17, 2008 11:46 am
I read them both.
And I gotta say.
I LOVE YOU SO MUCH! *super glomp*  
PostPosted: Thu Jul 17, 2008 12:48 pm
NOOOO! -pounds ground with fists- gonk

^^ 'course you do. <33 -is glomp'd-
i want to rework one of them, but i don't know which. which one did you think was better?
 

PandaEnlightenment
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JamesRaith

PostPosted: Thu Jul 17, 2008 2:47 pm
I submitted a poem to the arena, but it didn't show up...does it take a while before they get approved or something?  
PostPosted: Thu Jul 17, 2008 3:20 pm
mine didn't. 0: click on the link "my stuff" in the beta arenas, and you should be able to see if it worked or not. if it didn't, i would suggest resubmitting. ^^;
 

PandaEnlightenment
Captain


Rad Disease
Vice Captain

PostPosted: Fri Jul 18, 2008 11:14 am
0____0 Which one was better? Probably Violence Is Not The Answer. That one seemed to me that it took a bit longer to do. o:  
PostPosted: Fri Jul 18, 2008 11:25 am
Nope. In fact, I wrote that one in about five minutes. xD
Patron took me... considerably more to write.

Well then, its decided. I shall rework Violence is not the answer. c: I'll go post it now, and then all who read this must immediately migrate over to "post your writing." c:
 

PandaEnlightenment
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Rad Disease
Vice Captain

PostPosted: Sat Jul 19, 2008 12:26 am
*migrates with Panda's duckies* =D  
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