From the Sky, Sappho Smiles.

[Tak-Jak]

Love me boy, in the morning
when the mouth is full
of vibrations, caresses.
At dawn, my skin can taste you
and even the grass becomes moist
from our merging.

I feel you swirling in my chest,
and sliding your way through my veins.
Pele erupts for us,
flooding the land with her passion.
The civilians, they scream,
but are not afraid,
'for they know the secrets of her pulse.

And every night I can taste
Venus in the sky
shining just for us.

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Author's Comments

New worlds are
opening,
opening,
sighing.  

[KirbyVictorious]

Absolutely beautiful. No words wasted. You are a master of diction, Rem.  

[moonkhist]

I agree; its beautiful, with great imagery. One of the best poems I've read in a while, really.
♥ ♥ ♥

 

[Serenity Reed]

Wow. Like Imogen heap there, Tak.  

[d e s d e m o n o]

Mm, grass. I like the grass, and the volcanoes, and the stars.  

[moonkhist]

d e s d e m o n o

Mm, grass. I like the grass, and the volcanoes, and the stars.

makes you wanna actually experience it, doesn't it?
♥ ♥ ♥

 

[Voxxx]

Awesome, awesome, awesome. Blatant sexual overtones + references to pagan deities = EPIC WIN!  

[Tak-Jak]

@ Voxxy: Blatant sexual overtones are my favorite. xd

@ Des: Someday, I will taste the stars. Want to come with?

@ Reed: Yay for heaping! whee

@ Moon: Thank you very much loverly, means alot.

@ Kriby: I am no master.




@ All: Thank you for reading and wasting your time to comment. I love you all! heart  

[d e s d e m o n o]

Yes.  

[Voxxx]

Quite so. xd  

[charbookwyrm]

My god - that is amazing. Really beautifully written. Kirby doesn't sound so far off to me!  

[Tak-Jak]

Thanks very much.