Maleficent Night (a nightmarish story-poem)

[Chrysanthemum Moon]

Yay for nursery rhyme
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Little children of pure heart and mind
Please come to kill me tonight.
For gloom and brooms are all I can see
In this world which nothing’s worth living.
So, die, die, I can only say
And kiss the darkness that tears me to shreds.

You little old men with wrinkled hands and feet
Please come to die for me.
For you life’s but a smearing of blue
Fainting from wear and want of glue.
So, fade, fade, the death gods chant
And wander into the white canvas hand in hand.

Friends, of my age and unwise
Come to sin with me tonight.
For the siblings are dead, the adults screwed
On our Mephistopheles Planet, with nothing else to lose.
So, bleed, bleed, we can only try
To wake up from this nightmare that’s our reality on high.
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[KirbyVictorious]

O.o


it was hard to catch the flow. The story creeped me out. Good though!  

[Chrysanthemum Moon]

It's like a nightmare I had, so a bit episodic.  

[KirbyVictorious]

Damnnn. You could use some Tylenol PM or something.  

[Kasi Karra]

I really liked it.
There were a few times where I had to reread it to figure it out sweatdrop
but I really loved it heart
(I wish I could do poetry like that crying )