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 Posted: Fri Sep 19, 2008 10:36 pm
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bwah. This is the right thread... right?
One of my few works that I actually bothered to format and rhyme. Anyone want to bash it with a poisoned mace? sweatdrop
I wrote it for a butterfly-themed contest.
No, it's not a sonnet. I might one day kill a few lines and make it a sonnet, but at the moment, it's just long and rhyming. ninja
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Life Lives To Dreams End
Discreet tremble of the air;
sweetness of a sword sharp and fair.
The soft whisper of paper-thin blades,
coming alive as rugged armor fades.
A splash of twilight
with a kiss of midnight.
Kaleidoscope of colors, hypnotizing the mind;
spiral of ribbons dancing through the wind.
A subtle temptation across wind-blown cheeks,
a formless treasure disillusions seek.
Colors fade into rainbows so tragic,
filling widened eyes with illusions of magic.
Laughter of adolescence, a golden cage;
before the hidden beauty of turbulent age.
The world explodes into a brilliant sunrise,
ambitious eyes swallowing boundless skies.
Shoot into the blue with twisted directions;
gingerly fluttering, forgetting inhibitions.
Roam free with dreams of tomorrow,
before wings are drowned by truths of sorrow.
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Posted: Sun Sep 21, 2008 10:58 am
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