Prompt #3

[seleneswan]

So this is my rusty poetry. I haven't written any poetry in a long time...so here goes nothing. A haiku, about strawberries.

Strawberries

Luscious blushing fruit
With clinging crystal dew drops
An ambrosial tang

Criticism is greatly appreciated!

 

[serephemeral]

I like it. ^.^ Your poetry isn't rusty, or at leastyour haiku isn't.  

[Collote]

Short and sweet. Hah.

That's how haikus are supposed to be, and you did a great job... especially with your choice of words! [:

Now I want strawberries...

Nice picture, by the way.