Jutsu Approval Forum ((New Rule))

[xLytez]

Jedi: Denied. Extremely god moddish. I'msure you can figure out a way to get it approved however.  

[Naito_Are7]

((Puffbird))
Your Rank: Chunnin
Name of Jutsu: Morinaga ((Eternal Forest))
Rank of Jutsu: B
Range of Jutsu: 15 Meters
Jutsu's Element: Lightning
Description: Morinaga is a genjutsu that Areku develop that uses the sense of touch to effect the person. By sending a concentrated bolt of lightning from the user index finger, the user must hit either the spinal cord, forehead, forearm, or hand to take affect. What it does is the jolt of lightning goes through the person nervous system and into the opponents mind from there it takes affect. It hits the brain with the jolt mostly triggering a hallucination in ones mind since as they look up they only see a forest as they look around branches from the tree spring out and captures them from there they see a shadow figure, that starts to stab them slowly over and over in actuality is the bolt of lightning also triggering the pain nerves in the person mind causing them to go into shock. Since the jutsu uses such an advance for of lightning a person can't really do it by themselves, they need a summon or something else that jolts up the strength of lightning and even after that they need some time to set it up. And after they captured a person if there jounin or Chunin level they must keep the flow of lightning chakra between them to keep the genjutsu in there opponent minds a chunnin can't move away just closer if he tries to move away the chakra line will be broken while a jounin can move as long as it is in radius of 15 meters of the person as well keeping one index finger pointed at the opponent at all time. A sannin or higher can leave and the affected person will be stuck there for a while ((3 posts)) and all the Sannin must do is return the flow of chakra before the genjutsu wears off. The jutsu takes a lot of concentration a chunnin would have a hard time blocking an attack from someone else if there busy doing the jutsu.

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Your Rank: Chunnin
Name of Jutsu: Asobi ((Playing))
Rank of Jutsu: Jounin
Range of Jutsu: Close
Jutsu's Element: Bloodline/Wind
Description: Asobi is move that only someone who has the Seki-Reigan Stage 2 Tsubaki Susanoo can possibly use without no troubles. Though the normal one would be able to use it, but the sheer speed will cause them to become so dizzy that they would vomit as soon as they use it. It uses the speed that only a Seki-Reigan user has combining it with it after image clones. It is a Taijutsu counter move, first the user must be attacked to start it up, they will side step the attack coming at them and if it's to fast they will leave an after-image clone from there they make it almost impossible to block the attack as they use three more after images appearing in front of the opponent then one more seems to appear about to attack the person all this to disorient and confuse the opponent so much that they don't see the attack coming from there blind spot at great speed an open palm attack that uses wind to push there elbow at great force. An Uchiha or Hyugaa will mostly be likely able to see it though in a Hyugaa vision the chakra lines will look so blur they wouldn't be able to see where the use is coming to the last second as well with the Sharigan following the muscles be pretty hard to predict while the most advance bloodline limit might see it coming and be able to react.

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Your Rank: Chunnin
Name of Jutsu: Kure-ji-Asobi Kaze ((Crazy Playing Wind))
Rank of Jutsu: Chunnin
Range of Jutsu: 50 Meters
Jutsu's Element: Wind
Description: Is a tornado jutsu that the person does without handsign as they concentrate the chakra into there lungs and blow out to there hand making little spinning wind tops at first then they throw it to the floor and it speeds up at the direction that the user is controlling it to go. As it does it picks up more and more speed up to they become 7 feet tall and they will swirl around each other at great speed. Once it hits the opponent it starts to cut them up with the razor sharp wind then as it touches the skin of the opponent they detonate in front of them sending out a great burst of wind everywhere. A user must be careful not to use it with an opponent that is to close or they be caught up with there own explosion.
Chunnin - Can make up to 1
Jounin - 2 at the same time
Sannin - 3
Kage - 4  

[Rahenno]

Name of jutsu:Konton: Tendril devitation
Rank of Jutsu: stage two
Jutsu element: Dark energy
Description: The body of the user builds up Choas energy and stores it in the chest. When the user is ready to use this jutsu, the energy is released in a form of many tendril. the drills hit anyone within a 5 yard radius. This make for the perfect defense for any close range technique.  

[Fist of the Bro Star]

Your Rank: ANBU
Name of Jutsu: Cheshire Neko Detachment
Rank of Jutsu: S-Rank
Jutsu's Element: None
Description: This is an improvement from the past accepted jutsu, Cheshire Neko Henge. The main difference with this jutsu is that instead of the user's body being taken over and transformed into this ghost-like being, the user insteads pulls it out of their body to serve them. Same rules and limits apply to Cheshire as before. With this version the Cheshire can't escape with the user or make the user invisible. Cheshire's powers as a different being are his own, and can not be simply given to the anybody nore shared with anybody else. Like the Cheshire Neko Henge this jutsu takes a full post before Cheshire can appear.


Your Rank: ANBU
Name of Jutsu: Infinite-Fanged Lance
Rank of Jutsu: Jounin
Range of Jutsu: 2 meters
Jutsu's Element: Wind
Description: An improved and more powerful version of the past accepted jutsu, Bone-Fanged Lance. This version gives the attack more power and speed due to the increased tendrils that form around the arm as well as the number of twists that turn it. Strong taijutsu move that paralyzes the user's arm for at least one post after using it.

Your Rank: ANBU
Name of Jutsu: Death-Fanged Lance
Rank of Jutsu: S-Ranked
Range of Jutsu: 2.4 meters
Jutsu's Element: Wind
Description: Final upgrade for the Bone-Fanged Lance. This move turns the bone and tendrils a black color that distinguishes it from the others. These bones make a more elastic and powerfully densified material. The near infinite number of thin tendrils does tremendous damage to the opponent, resulting in almost certain death if hit directly. It greatly damages the user's arm. No matter how much power they have, a user can't use this attack more than twice in a fight, and after the second attack their arm will be unable to move for a few hours.



((Here's the accepted forms of the base jutsu I wanted to upgrade, in case you need to look at them for reference.

Cheshire Neko Henge
Rank of Jutsu: A
Range of Jutsu: Self
Jutsu's Element: None
Description: This jutsu forces the user to take on the characteristics and split personality of a being known as "Cheshire" (based off of the mischievious cat from Alice in Wonderland). This is usually noted by how the user will seemingly grin all the time combined with other physical changes such as hair turning a shade of purple, eyes becoming cat-like, or even growing a purple-furred tail. During this transformation the user can not be killed but like-wise can not kill anybody else. Cheshire also has the ability to willingly turn invisible or alter any other physical sense of being one might recieve from him such as sound, touch, or smell. This cannot be done instantly however and the process usually takes a few seconds to fully perform. What this means is that if Cheshire were to become invisible to somebody, for example, the person would see Cheshire's legs disappear, then his chest and arms, then his head, ect. Along with this, Cheshire has the ability to willingly dismember himself as well, allowing him to perform deranged and crazy feats such as taking off his head and then standing on it. If anything, Cheshire is more along the lines of something like a poltergeist than anything else. Though his abilities to cause physical harm to others is relatively weak (capable of only performing things a normal human could do such as tripping and definitely NOT any other jutsu), Cheshire instead uses trickery, mischief, and misdirection to toy with enemies and get them to perhaps hurt themselves. Performing the jutsu doesn't require any handsigns, but takes an entire post to complete the transformation since otherwise a user could misuse the jutsu to make an easy escape at any sign of danger. Because of how using this jutsu makes the real user lose all sense of himself in replacement for Cheshire, the jutsu isn't well liked among the users. However, what it does do is serve a very important escape function. Since Cheshire can also manipulate other's ability to sense him, Cheshire can also easily make an escape for the host to save their life. Since escaping is its main purpose and it is a being different from the user, turning into Cheshire instantly dispells any genjutsu or other disabling affects such as poison. The number of posts a user can maintain the transformation depends on their rank. Chuunin=5 posts. Jounin=8 posts. Sannin/Kage=12 posts. (must wait five posts before becoming completely invisible. must wait at least one post between jutsu activation and escape)


Bone-Fanged Lance
Rank: Chuunin
Description: Strong bone covers user's entire arm with a long and sharp end. Following it are several tendrils made with elastic bone that wrap themselves over each other so tightly around the user's arm that it literally twists the user's arm completely around several times. After maximum rotations and buildup are completed, the user can release the massive buildup all at once. This causes the tendrils to lash out in a fury of widespread, windmill shaped, insanely fast rotating blasts (something like a man-made helicopter blade). Because of the order and legth of tendril release, the attack forms a large cone-like shape capable of obliterating anything in its range. (can't be fired) ))  

[xLytez]

ok all of you who posted your customs recently...read the new rule.  

[_Neko-KittyXoX_]

OI!! Kitty here ^^ I have some ideas for new jutsus for the origami no dara (suiton). since the bloodline is only about moving paper and let is explode....what is...not very special at all... here comes my masterpiece *cough* THESE ARE NO KITTY ONLY JUTSUS, I WOULD LIKE TO SHARE THESE WITH OTHER ORIGAMI NO DARA USERS, THESE ARE BLOODLINE JUTSUS WHO I WISH TO BE ADDED.

MY RANK: ANBU

Name: Paper Barrier.
Rank: Jounin (A)
Range: Can contain 4-5 people inside.
Owner: origama no dara suiton users.
Description: The user uses His/her Chakra to create a paper barrier around his/her self and/or around allies to protect them from flying objects, jutsus or taijutsus attack. The hardness of the barrier depends on the ammount of used chakra and the layers of paper used. The barrier can is strong as stone and can be stronger then steel when a lot of chakra is pushed in the barrier* This technique requires a huge ammount of paper, so the user will had to use the Art of Pressing Pulp technique before using this, since the ammount of paper used for this technique is not able to carry in a bag.


Name: Paper creatures/puppets
Rank: Chunin -> Sanin
Range: 50 meters (user also has to follow the creature)
Owner: Origami no dara (suiton) users
Description: not the same as the Kimitate-assembly technique, who can fold paper in anything they want... This technique can make creatures out of paper, who are able to attack an enemy. Sanin ranked ninjas will be able to create better creatures then chunin, since sanin is able to put more chakra in them. Examples:
Paper Boar/tiger/dog : who is able to bite their oponent with their teeth and scratch with nails. asks an amount of chakra but can also be done by chunins. but still, when they do not have the ammount of chakra, the animal will just fall apart in paper sheets.
Paper Guardian: A guardian made of paper who can smash their oponent with their hard-as-rock arms. made of some nice layers of paper or paper meshay. asks more chakra to create. (can also be seen as puppet)
Paper Snake : A huge snake with razor-sharp teeth, able to bite the oponent to death, or able to swallow the openent, which after the user can do something else with the paper of the snake since the oponent is inside. This asks a HUGE ammount of chakra and can only be done by talented and professional origami no dara (suiton) users.
This technique also requires tons of paper sheets or meshay, so the user will have to post the technique for making paper out of trees, before using this technique, the needed ammount of paper can not be carried in a bag....again...(( Making creatures with this who are impossible to defeat, or who are overpowered will be seen as godmodding i guess. so be carefull with what you make))

Name: Paper plane
Rank: Jounin - Sanin
Range: can fly as far as the user has chakra. the plain has to be underneath the user, cant be used as a missile.
Owner: origami no dara users
Description: The user uses a huge ammount of chakra and a huge ammount of paper sheets (who will have to be made in a previous post by using the art of the pressing pulp since the needed ammount of paper can not be carried in a bag....)) To create a HUGE paper plane who can carry arround 7 a 8 people. The plane uses a gliding technique, used by pilots with gliders. this means the plane has to be on a high building or a mountain to set off. the plane can be usefull to cary anbu ninjas or others to different places. like for the anbu, seek and kill strategy will be usefull with the plane, cuz they can attack all togheter at one time. But it does Need a HUGE ammount of chakra to carry all the people on the plane, lets stand making the masterpiece.  

[xLytez]

add a weakness such as creatures are vulnerable to fire and you're good to go. Look i'm going back to having everyone post here because when you pm me there is always a big argument as to why you're jutsu or weapons are denied, so I'll announce everything publicly again.  

[i3 tails Yagura]

Your Rank: Sannin
Name of Jutsu: Freezing wind
Rank of Jutsu: A.
Range of Jutsu:100 ft
Jutsu's Element: Hyouton
Description: After performing the needed hand signs the user inhales the moisture in the air.They then exhale Creating a white cloud surrounding 100 feet in front of the user. The cloud contains bits of ice and water. If the victim is trapped in the cloud the bits of ice will latch on to them making it hard to move. When the bit of ice have hit the opponent the user snaps his fingers creating a flash freeze with in the cloud. When the cloud disappears the area is a frozen wasteland. Since the ice is a hyouton clan move a extreme flame (a rank) is need to melt the ice. The victim can not break out of the ice seeing as the are in a hibernative state making it the perfect jutsu for retrieval missions.


Your Rank: Sannin
Name of Jutsu: Snowflake destruction
Rank of Jutsu: S
Range of Jutsu: 50 ft
Jutsu's Element: Hyouton
Description: The user focuses his chakara and creates a large snow flake the size of a rasenshuriken. The user throws the snow at his target. If hit the victim becomes immobile and loses all control over his body and is frozen in place. The snow flake goes up above the victim and makes a dome out snow flakes. Then the user clicks their teeth creating snow spikes coming from the center of the snowflakes. The spikes start tearing into the victim. It doesn't hit any vital organs. Once the user clicks his teeth again the spikes disappear and the victim in unconscious on the ground easy for the user to retrieve  

[xLytez]

Jello: Freezing WInd...Approved, remove the whole cannot break out, because they should have some way to defend themselves such as uchiha with our black flames and what not.

Destruction is denied, just too strong.  

[i3 tails Yagura]

Sen of the WInd

Jello: Freezing WInd...Approved, remove the whole cannot break out, because they should have some way to defend themselves such as uchiha with our black flames and what not.

Destruction is denied, just too strong.

Well when your frozen you go in the whole hibernative state thing or you die so I tried to make it less godmoddish but when in the cloud thats when you use your attack to break like your black flame  

[xLytez]

I see, then it can stay the way it is. Though most people wouldn't thik to break out in the early stages of the attack.