Rate this avi?

[Amossk]

hey, I'm working to make this avi. I still need Dancer's Bottom and Black Cross Belts. Tell me what you think of it and if its worth it :3

keep in mind its just an alternate avi and I wanna keep it simple.
And if any kind soul would donate one of those items I would be eternaly grateful :3

 

[Hikaru Hoko]

It's okay, I'd go with another hair style.

If I can get enough gold, I'll gladly give you an item!  

[Solitaire Wolf]

I think the cross belts are unnecessary and the hair doesn't fit somehow, but other than that it looks really good.  

[Solitaire Wolf]

Try this instead:

 

[Furrie Princess Nala]

try brown hair and lose the blets try something that blends into the avatar instead.