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sad story about a broken town pls comment!

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ghoster5

PostPosted: Tue Mar 10, 2009 12:57 pm
story:

once there was a boy who lived in batgumph he hated it there he lived in a war zone the people fought over factories as work was scarce and the pay was terrible anyway so it was pointless everday 1% of the population there died off it does'nt sound much but this is a huge city so 1% is a lot of people . every street there was horrible sights to be seen from prostition to people roasting rats to eat.living there was hard because the rate of canniblism was excelarating up.

this kid is called tom today hadn't started well his dad attempted to eat him again tom ran away he almost got away unscathed but his dad had managed to throw a bottle at him but it only hit tom in the head .tom thought that the head didn't matter he thought that it wasn't as bad as last week nope it definately not as bad.

tom shivered at the thought. as he was running he saw something glowing so he stopped and went closer to it precautiously it had a humanoid form yet it was much smaller and it was floating it seemed quite scared of him so he whispered to it that he was a good boy not a bad boy a good boy . when he edged forward it moved back so he offered it a dead rat that he had been saving for later it was a fat juicy one he laid it in front of him .

the being went forward and sniffed it .it gave tom the idea that it didn't like it so tom scrambled forward and ate it . the form giggled as he did so .

the end so far.  
PostPosted: Tue Mar 10, 2009 12:58 pm
pls rite opinions about it  

ghoster5


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PostPosted: Wed Mar 11, 2009 2:55 pm
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PostPosted: Thu Apr 09, 2009 10:30 am
it waz ok well i guess sense it is a sad story it i pretty good
 

99bianca


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PostPosted: Fri Jun 12, 2009 3:38 pm
good idea, but poorly executed  
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