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Tabitha the Maiden

PostPosted: Mon Jun 15, 2009 3:34 am
Strawberries
planting them
in early spring
see them grow
watch them flower
picking them
in early summer
under the sun
lovely, heart-shaped
Strawberries
 
PostPosted: Sat Aug 01, 2009 6:12 pm
This was a bit simple for my taste. It also seems like the line breaks are a bit arbitrary. I would suggest going into more detail, and putting the breaks in more appropriate places. Try making each line a seperate thought.  

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