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 Posted: Tue Nov 15, 2005 5:31 pm
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Posted: Tue Nov 15, 2005 8:00 pm
your skills are really good
make sure to add a awsome background which gives any pic a brillent PAZZAZE (lol)
all in all your a really good drawer, keep it up
aslo your clothing skills are way better then mine, but do a little mor detail
oh and awsome job with shading!
9/10 ^____^
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Posted: Wed Nov 16, 2005 11:40 am
Explain what you mean by add a little more detail please? I'm not exactly sure what you mean.
And, I must confess, my backgrounds are horrible. A bunch of squiggles and swirly lines. >.< I've never taken a formal class on landscapes. oh well, thanks for being honest with me.
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Posted: Wed Nov 16, 2005 5:23 pm
xd awesome indeed 3nodding you handle proportions quite well, same with detail in clothing. i guess the only critique i would give is to experiment with different poses. other than that...uh...color?
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Posted: Wed Nov 16, 2005 5:44 pm
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Posted: Sat Nov 19, 2005 1:17 pm
Most of your proportioning is right on the dot, probably one of your strongest points. biggrin
Hmm...well I think the only real thing that could be improved is the clothing. The clothing seems a little flat.
The Dueling Jester picture could be fixed in terms of proportions, such as the head. It seems a little small. The shading is spectacular though. I see a lot of crosshatching happening! biggrin
Naen is amazing. Awesome work!!
The arms and hands in the Laucian picture seem a little off. But again, overall, it's still a very accurate picture.
Your detail in the Charlie picture is awesome. Period.
The Kakashi and Crimson pictures are splendid! =B The only thing I can see improvement on in those anime styled pics is the hair. The lines in the hair make it seem stiff. Try making less pointed lines, sketching it out really helps.
Your pics overall? A whopping 8.9/10!! Try and fix the clothing and some of the proportioning. If you just fix that, I can pretty much guarantee a perfect score =P.
You have a good style going, it's the best I've seen in awhile. Well done!! 3nodding
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Posted: Sat Nov 19, 2005 11:34 pm
Hrm.. Nice half realistic, half anime drawing ^o^
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Posted: Wed Dec 07, 2005 5:48 pm
wow i totally forgot about this thread. Thanks for the tips you guys.
And thats not Kakisha lawl, thats my avatar. Drawin in a...bishonen? style. But yeah thanks!
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Posted: Fri Dec 09, 2005 12:34 pm
I really love the way you draw faces, full of expression! And the style in which you shade is awesome. Naen, and Charlie, are my favorites out of these. Their expressions are just wonderful. For the life of me I just can't seem to make noses right, but you can. I'm so jealous. I'd like to see something of yours colored.
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Posted: Sun Dec 18, 2005 9:46 am
your drawings are very good- you can draw guys much better then me ^^ but then again it tends to be girls are able to draw females better cause they understand their own anatomy and guys the same ^^;;
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Posted: Sun Dec 18, 2005 12:16 pm
I love the third picture. surprised It's so emotive and well drawn. Good job.
It looks like you have a pretty good grasp of anatomy, so that's good. The faces could use a bit more... I don't know.. expression? You could also try some different poses. Perhaps someone sitting/lying down? Or someone with their back to you? A little more variety would be nice.
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