It feels like my heart is being ripped out. When you called and told me you were leaving. I though it was a dream, and I know it is... A dream from which I cannot wake. Even though you live close to me I still feel like I'm saying goodbye. All I can think of right now is to call you and cry and beg you not to leave. Even though I can call you I cant think of what it is going to be like not being to see you every day, I had people leave may times before you but this pain, this anguish, I wish it would stop. I wish it wouldnt hurt so much. I know you had to do this... Just remember me and remember that I will always love you and you will always be in my heart and never forgotten.
Ok this one sucks I know but I had to get it off my chest. I feel better now. Comment!
Posted: Sat Jul 25, 2009 7:42 am
Very emotional and deep, I can kinda relate and tell where your coming from ^^"
I think a good title would be, "Dreaming Reality"? :]
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Posted: Thu Jul 30, 2009 7:35 am
This is gooddd (: All my poems are untitled, so don't ask me for help. I suck at naming things q:
Posted: Fri Aug 14, 2009 8:05 pm
hahha, i suck at naming thigs too but I have a name, its stupid though "Gone but never forgotten" or "Nightmare" because you said something about a dream that you cant wake or something. I like the first one more, but really, its what the poem means to you :3