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ReichenFeels

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PostPosted: Fri Aug 14, 2009 8:17 pm
Yeah.. Uhm, this is kinda a song, not really a poem, but whatever.

When you canot find what you're looking for
You always go into your own lonley world wanting more
If no one can heal your pain
What will you do?

Dying is not the answer
Although the idea may spread like cancer
You are not the only one
Who feels that they are unloved

You hide behind that happy face
So no one can find a trace of sadness
Does my crying heal your pain?

If you are looking for chaos
then watch as the devil takes your life away
But what price must you pay?

Its just another rainy day
Cold blood runs through his veins
His face turns as white as snow
While his blood covers the bathroom floor
He goes into his lonley world looking for more

please tell me if this is any good..
It was my first song..  
PostPosted: Thu Aug 20, 2009 2:55 pm
I like it alot. You did a really good job with it. ^^
 

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PostPosted: Thu Aug 20, 2009 6:06 pm
cool  
PostPosted: Sun Aug 23, 2009 10:38 am
[Really biggrin
Cause I wasnt sure if i should of put this out there.. I hate everything I write.. and I wasnted to see another persons perspective on itquote="xxxiFrench_Fryxxx"]
I like it alot. You did a really good job with it. ^^
 

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