after weeks of artist block!

[White_Ryvnn]

finally! i couldnt draw for a week! god! btw about this piccy. i used the cover of a rurouni kenshin manga. so i kept the long thin style that watsuki-sama uses, that i kinda have in my own style anyway^^ so enjoy and please comment for me^^ this is also on my devart. so thats what the little message on it is about^^
 

[White_Ryvnn]

o yeah... if you guys could rate please? thatd be nice heart  

[AbstractAngel]

I like her outfit and I like the wings too. 9/10  

[White_Ryvnn]

AbstractAngel

I like her outfit and I like the wings too. 9/10

thank you!!! ^^  

[K33n]

yheey, for an end to Artist's Blooock!


Anywayssss, Nice job. That wing though...I'm not sure it would hold up. It needs more muscle in there, so a thicker frame (I know this only because I made the same mistake) and adding smoe smaller feathers in a slightly darker grey would give it goodness. If you added something to that staff, I don't know what, it might have more depth. It looks a tad flat when I look at it. I can't put my finger on why either. Cursesssss. The hair, hrm, the highlights are numbering too many. it looks like her hair is striped. Theres my two and a half cents. biggrin Keep up the work Ryv!



I still envy your coloring skills. I cannot, I repeat CANNOT color it so it looks good on the computer. In real life, it looks spectacular (I flatter myself), but the second i load it onto the computor, the colored pencils become hellish. Anyway.  

[Kelmur]

It's very good that being said;

Hair: all the highlights you have in your toons hair you should shrink them a lil they take over the while hair and take away from it.

Wings: the wings look fine although they look a lil starched up and a lil too straight, you can fix that by making it a lil more curvy and rounder.

Clothing: The clothings good until that flap near hte wings it looks too stiff but that's it and it's really good

Staff: the staff's fine

Hands and Legs: a really good

Face: Face is good ^^

other then that I really like it.  

[White_Ryvnn]

K33n

yheey, for an end to Artist's Blooock!


Anywayssss, Nice job. That wing though...I'm not sure it would hold up. It needs more muscle in there, so a thicker frame (I know this only because I made the same mistake) and adding smoe smaller feathers in a slightly darker grey would give it goodness. If you added something to that staff, I don't know what, it might have more depth. It looks a tad flat when I look at it. I can't put my finger on why either. Cursesssss. The hair, hrm, the highlights are numbering too many. it looks like her hair is striped. Theres my two and a half cents. biggrin Keep up the work Ryv!



I still envy your coloring skills. I cannot, I repeat CANNOT color it so it looks good on the computer. In real life, it looks spectacular (I flatter myself), but the second i load it onto the computor, the colored pencils become hellish. Anyway.

thank you
o yes. the wings. theyre intentionally small. i usually cant STAND cherubic wings.. they make me go ickkkk but i thought maybe.. just this once.. id give it a go. thank you for the other comments tho! i didnt notice any of em and now that you mention them, i have to agree with everything you said! ^^  

[White_Ryvnn]

Kelmur

It's very good that being said;

Hair: all the highlights you have in your toons hair you should shrink them a lil they take over the while hair and take away from it.

Wings: the wings look fine although they look a lil starched up and a lil too straight, you can fix that by making it a lil more curvy and rounder.

Clothing: The clothings good until that flap near hte wings it looks too stiff but that's it and it's really good

Staff: the staff's fine

Hands and Legs: a really good

Face: Face is good ^^

other then that I really like it.

thank you! yes im still all nOObish at wings. i dont really draw them much anymore^^ faery wings > angel wings ^^  

[K33n]

Dragonfly wings> Faery Wings.

Oooh I love them, lawl. Even though Fairies do sometimes have wings like that, butterfly style wings are usually used. Yeah, wings ARE a pain in many ends on my body. But you are doing good. I should hire you to color my artwork or something.