Haiku

[Ahryssa]

Recently I decided to try and write a haiku (5-7-5) and I though it was fun so I wrote a few more. And now I decided to make a thread so me and others can post haiku xd

Here's one of mine:

Snowflakes are falling
Covering the earth in white
A blanket of cold  

[Ahryssa]

The sun is rising
Colors on the horizon
Here begins the day  

[Ahryssa]

A ballerina
Dancing and twirling around
Lost in the moment  

[Ahryssa]

A girl in a bed
Staring at the white ceiling
Praying for more time  

[Who is Anthony Lee]

Im going to try this out smile

ummm

Im bad at this

Boy playing football
Getting tackled everywere
Hoping to get done


haha thats a first and probly the last..

I totally suck XD  

[Ahryssa]

Bambi44

Im going to try this out smile

ummm

Im bad at this

Boy playing football
Getting tackled everywere
Hoping to get done


haha thats a first and probly the last..

I totally suck XD

It's actually not that bad 3nodding  

[talitha001]

omg I so wanna try

crying to death
hurting so bad
wishing to end it all

rofl what you think?  

[Ahryssa]

talitha001

omg I so wanna try

crying to death
hurting so bad
wishing to end it all

rofl what you think?

I like it, but haiku is suposed to have a certain pattern of syllables...I supose I should have said it earlier sweatdrop
Your first line should have 5 syllables
the second line 7
and the last 5

There are other forms of haiku, but this one is the basic one...  

[lxl_Tatsuya_lxl]

haikous aren't really my thing, but i did write a few that are part of a series
i titled it "The Christian Haikous"

The Earth is mortal
Having beginning and end
A birth and a death

So shall men, too, die
But the soul is forever
And will then live on

The spirit lives on
Having not a beginning
And shall never end

personally, i don't like poems that have specific rules like sonnets or haikous
if anyone would like to look at some of the other poems i've written, just look me up in the art arena for poetry/ lyrics =D