First Time Posting?

[Unmei_no_LaLuna]

This is my current WIP. I don't think I've posted art here before :3 Feedback is nice.

http://www.deviantart.com/deviation/25767977/  

[Unmei_no_LaLuna]

http://www.deviantart.com/deviation/25848680/ Step 2 if anyone wants to help me find the Flaws please help smile  

[cart22]

um... Edo's arms aren't the same size...  

[Rhel]

Wooo, nice. *die-hard FMA fan*
Ed's face is very nicely done, and despite a few flaws in his proportioning, we probably won't care once the picture's done. (From shoulder to elbow should be the same length as shoulder to waist (a little above the belly button). But you did such a nice job on the torso, I'd hate to see it go! Soo... *dies*)
Envy's face is a little odd, like you said in your Artist's Comments. I think it's because his face is too narrow for his eyes to fit properly?
Overall, though, a VERY nice picture. Can't wait to see it finished! whee  

[Unmei_no_LaLuna]

cart22

um... Edo's arms aren't the same size...

You think? Gee and how should I fix that Hmmm?

razz I kinda knew they where off. I also realised that I had fully sketched out his jacket sleeve over one Arm and not the other........  

[Unmei_no_LaLuna]

Rhel

Wooo, nice. *die-hard FMA fan*
Ed's face is very nicely done, and despite a few flaws in his proportioning, we probably won't care once the picture's done. (From shoulder to elbow should be the same length as shoulder to waist (a little above the belly button). But you did such a nice job on the torso, I'd hate to see it go! Soo... *dies*)
Envy's face is a little odd, like you said in your Artist's Comments. I think it's because his face is too narrow for his eyes to fit properly?
Overall, though, a VERY nice picture. Can't wait to see it finished! whee

hehe Thanks for the comment. I think the problem is the back of Envy's head is too high up for the way the face is positioned. biggrin As for the Torso and such that's an easy fix. Thank god all of this is still in pencil :3 hehe. But thanks for pointing out your observations biggrin they'll totally help in the long run.