Critique My Art Please. (updated)

[DrStones]

critique my art please. thanks.











proof for u skeptical noobs


 

[Vera Lieazoki]

They are pretty intense.
I love the action scenes in them.  

[DrStones]

Vera Lieazoki

They are pretty intense.
I love the action scenes in them.

thankyou. appreciate it.  

[Sumomo4life]

I really love them! I'm not quite up to your level yet. I'm hoping to get there though.  

[Larzar]

There nice!

My only problem is that thye dont show much diversity, like there are all hardcore jagged action scenes.

Whta if someone comissioned you to do a Hello Kitty banner?

I'm not saying you couldn't do that, just that I havent seen it in your samples.  

[amosa]

Nice use of color to create intensity, but as said before, it would be nice to have some variety of mood in there.

Also, brush up on the typography- those fonts and their use with that...stroke and angling the words in the "Dark Loners" banner flatten out the space and take away from the image. Figure out ways to integrate the text into the image without making the image and words seem completely separate from each other.

 

[DrStones]

amosa

Nice use of color to create intensity, but as said before, it would be nice to have some variety of mood in there.

Also, brush up on the typography- those fonts and their use with that...stroke and angling the words in the "Dark Loners" banner flatten out the space and take away from the image. Figure out ways to integrate the text into the image without making the image and words seem completely separate from each other.

lol yeah im getting better. thanks for the advice. i figure i need to reduce opacity smile  

[Keiravarutri]

I would have to agree that the type needs work. You'd be surprised to see how much of an impact non-fancy fonts make on any piece of work. By fancy fonts I mean, fonts that have party-like attributes, or fonts that are way out there and out of the ordinary. They may look cool, but they have their uses elsewhere. Standard/default fonts often times look much better.

It does look like you're set on one type of style. It's good to an extent, but don't be afraid to expand your borders and really do something out of the ordinary. Try making something without 3D renders for example, or without ready-made graphics. It's a challenge to some, but it'll definitely help expand your knowledge on what's out there.

Have fun.  

[DrStones]

Keiravarutri

I would have to agree that the type needs work. You'd be surprised to see how much of an impact non-fancy fonts make on any piece of work. By fancy fonts I mean, fonts that have party-like attributes, or fonts that are way out there and out of the ordinary. They may look cool, but they have their uses elsewhere. Standard/default fonts often times look much better.

It does look like you're set on one type of style. It's good to an extent, but don't be afraid to expand your borders and really do something out of the ordinary. Try making something without 3D renders for example, or without ready-made graphics. It's a challenge to some, but it'll definitely help expand your knowledge on what's out there.

Have fun.

thank you but honestly about the 3d thats what half the people tell me thats what they like about my art compared to others. most other people do simple backgrounds which are boring, but yeah i k text + me = O.o..?  

[Poison-Ivy99]

i think they look great expecially hitsugaya heart but maybe you could change it up a little...  

[The Striped Cow]

they are really good i really like them!!  

[The Striped Cow]

do you mind telling how extactly is it that you them..they are great.i want to learn how to do them.  

[Detective Hagemann]

Great, I like the bright vibrant colors.