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Posted: Sun Oct 04, 2009 9:00 am
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Posted: Sun Oct 04, 2009 5:43 pm
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I'm way too far to post all of my story, even what I've typed. It's almost sixty pages on word and I'm not even close to were I stopped physically writing and switched to typing...
Well, the main character, Jacky, was kidnapped as a young child and abandoned in the mountains. She was rescued by three people. A priest, a swordsmen and a military leader. The three of the are from different world. It's kinda like the golden compass's idea of multiple worlds but its easier to travel between them and, of the known ones, they aren't to much differnt from ours. The raised her with her adopted family, the Shimigamis, in the first part of my book is a war between the two main ampie clans. She looks like a teenager and young adult during the series.
In the second part, were I start my foreshadowing, she's kidnapped again cause she doesn't want her friends to get hurt. She over hears a conversation between her kidnapper and an unknown, but very old, man. I wanted him to be my main villian and very smart because for centuries he was trying to bring down major powers of the known worlds from behind the scenes. Yet most have no idea he's around because he, more or less, hides behind Dabura. Dabura is what appears to be in controll of his clan but, and I try to make it not very obvious, he can't lead it on his own.
In the fourth part, skipping the thrid cause it doesn't have much to do with this, I'm trying to made Dabura seem more angry so my villian, Haunshoffer, will slowly but surely come into veiw as the master mind. Only I'm not that far yet...I'm trying to type it up and edit it a bit so people can detect the foreshadowing a little bit more...
I wanted to use someone that was somewhat known of in that era of history because Yasha, a werewolf that loved Jacky's aunt, was a Japanese fighter pilot. Also Haunshoffer stood out becuase he was a great stratigist but few know about him. I've only known about him for about two years but his, almost uncanny, ability to blend in kinda stood out.
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Posted: Mon Oct 05, 2009 7:57 am
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Priestess of Neptune Crew
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Posted: Mon Oct 05, 2009 5:44 pm
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Posted: Wed Oct 14, 2009 4:05 pm
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Posted: Sat Oct 17, 2009 9:38 am
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Posted: Sat Oct 17, 2009 9:09 pm
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Posted: Tue Oct 20, 2009 3:18 pm
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