Doesn't really feel like a poem....

[OoPeroxidePrincessoO]

It felt more like writing a rant while using the enter key to much. But I wrote this like, just now, because I can't sleep >.< And I just wanted to get someones opinion on it.....

Pressure.
So much pressure
I can’t bare it.
I’m being crushed
“Be the perfect daughter”
“Be the perfect student”
“Be normal for once”
Crushing me….
“Be hot.”
“Be sexy”
“Be perfect”
Crushing me…
“Do this”
“Do that”
“Do everything”
Crushing me…
Hurting me…
Killing me.
And you don’t even care.
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Yeah.... I'm not much of a poet..... And it didn't do a damn thing to help me sleep....  

[SADERR]

It is poetry. Just because it doesn't rhyme doesn't mean it's not poetry. It was a quick poem for sure, but had meaning and poetry nonetheless.

Certainly better than a lot of the emo poems:
"Hang myself, woe is me
Slit my wrist instantly"
Yeah, I seen that before. it was just one line of the poem (I think it was on dA) but it irritated me.  

[OoPeroxidePrincessoO]

Lol, Thanks ^-^  

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Jonathonn

It is poetry. Just because it doesn't rhyme doesn't mean it's not poetry. It was a quick poem for sure, but had meaning and poetry nonetheless.

Certainly better than a lot of the emo poems:
"Hang myself, woe is me
Slit my wrist instantly"
Yeah, I seen that before. it was just one line of the poem (I think it was on dA) but it irritated me.

XD