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xLiliths Childx

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PostPosted: Mon Oct 19, 2009 4:48 pm
I own the dark
In this condition.
Dark that creeps up
In this day.
As it does everyday.

But in this condition,
The darkness stays
In my body
All day trying to get out,
Dying to get to other people.

It pulls me and pushes,
It tempts and urges
For me to let it go
For me to let it loose,
To spread its emotions.

The dark takes my emotions
And feeds on them.
The sadness and hate are still there,
But they are faint
As the dark feeds on the emotions that I hide.

I couldn't surpress it the other day,
So it got out
Into other people's bodies,
And as I watched with wide eyes,
They all started to mutate into demonic forms.

And I smiled.
A little smile to myself as I realized,
I still control the dark.
The dark still obeys me
As it made the ugly demonic forms bow.

Then again there was the
Little darkness that was inside of me.
Speaking to me,
Guiding me gently pushing me to
Let it loose once more.

So I did and it
Wreaked havoc upon the world for me,
Anything to get my
Love and appreciation.
Yet there was something wrong.

I realized that I was the
Only mortal on this life-sustaining planet.
So I commanded my dark
To stop the madness.
Apparently I had made the wrong choice.

The darkness I had inside of me
Decided to turn on me.
It flooded into my lungs so I couldn't breathe,
As I unfurled my black dragon wings and screamed,
I let it out to rule the world in my place.

It felt bad though
Yet it was angry that I commanded it to stop.
So it brought me back to life
And brutally slaughtered me in different ways,
Over and over again.

It still rules the world today
Even if it lost its reign to the mortals.
But it rules in our hearts,
Gently chiding us to do things we shouldn't.
It lives in all of us.

And here I am,
Poor little mortal being
Sitting in the core of the earth,
With the little darkness I have left.
Talking to it gently ammending it.

In the end
Humanity ended up giving unto the
Darkness once more.
But only I'm alive again,
And the torment of being alive with the little good side of the darkness drove me into madness.

I ended up jumping in a lava pool
Before my darkness began to torture me again.
It couldn't find my ruins.
Yet my spirit is alive telling this story,
And beware, human, for the darkness will rise again.
 
PostPosted: Wed Dec 02, 2009 12:42 pm
i luv ur writing if
it's a poem it's
really good.
BTW:i hate the dark.  

emo skater__gurl2114


xLiliths Childx

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PostPosted: Sat Dec 05, 2009 6:51 pm
omg I'm sorry!!! I love the dark...it is a poem...I guess you could call it freestyle so... =/ but hank you! ^^  
PostPosted: Sat Dec 05, 2009 8:59 pm
that was a beautiful epic of my beloved nee-sama.
your words gave me such a beautiful image of your world as it destroyed the masses. brovo and keep it up  

Trace Tsukuyomi Hitori


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PostPosted: Thu Dec 31, 2009 8:33 am
Beautiful ( a true artist can write a poem like that and u must be one)  
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