Fear and Anger Results.

[xLiliths Childx]

The blood ran down my face,
And the fear sucked it all in through my fingers,
Maybe they'll give me my space,
Maybe they won't bother to linger.

The anger came in through doses,
And it never went away,
They all just turned their noses,
And my world began to sway.

This whole depression is crap,
All these cuts on my skin are proof,
This will all be gone in a snap,
I finally jumped from the roof.

- You could say basically, fear and anger mixed together can lead to suicide. Just an observation -

 

[ReichenFeels]

I really like the rhymes int his poem, well done :3  

[roboCaim]

IxI 3mily IxI

I really like the rhymes int his poem, well done :3

that is so true i really like it was me in the poem  

[Harley91594]

amazing. everything rhymed, but it had a natural flow. some people rhyme on purpose and then the poem doesn't make sense, but yours was brilliant. and you're right. fear and anger do lead to suicide. that's why i almost did it.  

[xLiliths Childx]

Harley91594

amazing. everything rhymed, but it had a natural flow. some people rhyme on purpose and then the poem doesn't make sense, but yours was brilliant. and you're right. fear and anger do lead to suicide. that's why i almost did it.

I've almost commit suicide too. And it was out of loneliness and fear. But I just got really bored and we were talking about suicide in health so that's what I came up with during my advisory so. I've gotten alot of positive results along with you guys, so thanks. ^^