DREAM let me no what u think

[Sour Patch kid of -KL-]

would u dare to dream a dream that takes u to the sky?
hold your breath and not regret the things that come to mind.
love the one who loves you back theres nothin more to life then that.
In the end the life uyou mend will be the one that you defend.  

[Ekeanyanwu]

Hmmmm....not bad, although (in my opinon) I find the last line to be a tad sketchy. I know the rhyme scheme you're going for but...xD  

[starryluminara]

that's really good, I love it although I doubt many people in this world care for others. Oh and, I think you should maybe write a little more. That's just my opinion.  

[Broken Heart Nightmares]

I Like it biggrin
It sounds like something in a poetry reciting contest