Let me know what you think please

[aleki chan]

I trusted you with everything that I could, then you go and break that trust, the moment I gave it entirely, you taught me one thing though, don’t trust anyone with anything they can use against you

They tell you they love you, and you believe them, then when you finally give your whole heart to them, they go and shatter it, leaving you alone to put it back together

After they get past your guard, you trust them, because their the only ones who have tried to get past when everyone else gave up on you, in return you give your love and risk it being given back

You swore you would love me no matter what, then another girl comes along and you left me, then you were mooning after her, when she rejected you, you expected me to forgive you and take you back. Do you really think it works that way?  

[lovelyshai]

awww, i sorry sad you really need a hug. HUGS , with love there is risk my friend c:  

[Kasai_Haigara]

Wow, I feel for you man. And you know, I am having an internal conflict now about asking a girl out. But I will try and find the answer. Hope something good happens to you man. HOPE!  

[Sep13]

the poem has allot of feeling in it. and if its true, life isnt ment to be easy, but at least you got farther than i did, the girl i loved blew me off to go and f**ked every guy at my school and wouldnt even give me a chance to go out with her and show her just how much i loved her  

[Demon JR]

Love hurts an in the end if not careful may kill you....Its best to tread carefully in those waters the poem is it something you went through or something you felt...  

[Creepy Kuro Neko]

It is possible to die from a broken heart, and those who live wish they had died (I've been a victim of love before) but there is a bright side. Once your heart has held, when you find love agin it is even more beautiful than it was before.  

[Vanna1994]

Sounds really good, and you can tell there is emotion in that  

[Sw33t Symphony]

Thats horrible. But I can only relate to the second since that describes my love story. Its sad. but Im happy I have someone to help me now.  

[Pandeh-L]

intense :/  

[Survivor Apprentice]

I think that you are stronger after you've beaten all this. We have no choice but to be strong in this life. Hhail to life's grace with your humility and faith: there are many dreams for us to accomplish.
May He heal all the wounds.