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poem i wrote last night, what do you thibk?

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jacard

PostPosted: Sun Dec 20, 2009 12:29 pm
POEM: MELODY IN THE DARKEST OF NIGHT

In the dark
I cannot see
I cannot breathe

My steps are the steps that will remain so delicate, so quiet
My breathing is shallow
My heart you cannot hear

When I move it is so fluid
When I move my spirit trails behind me

In the night
I am awake
I lie in bed, I pace my room… I am waiting

My mind tells me the rules, I must think, I must know
My heart beats the beat of longing
My eyes stare into the vision of your beauty

When I speak the words mean nothing
When I write your voice soars in my head

In the dark
I wish to fly
I wish to live

My patterns are consistant
My lungs create the melody
My love is everlasting

When I step the fear is noticeable
When I touch the pain is felt

In the night
I am in fear
I am alone

My brain speaks only in silence
My heart longs for you
My vision is that of only perfection

When I sleep I hear the I hear the language
When I set aside my pen and paper, words are all I know

In the dark
I am afraid

In the night
I can see your face

In the darkest of night
I am not afraid, I can sleep
I have you

My mind soars with the visions of your words
My breathing returns as I stare into your eyes
My mouth hums the melody created by the lungs, and the heart, and the mind

When I hear the music your voice appears in my head
When I wish to speak, I can only sing

When I am alone
I hum the melody of the darkest of night…  
PostPosted: Sun Dec 20, 2009 4:03 pm
your poems ar smooth great and wonderful  

Bryan Son of Wolf

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jacard

PostPosted: Sun Dec 20, 2009 9:36 pm
Bryan lopezexe
your poems ar smooth great and wonderful

thank you  
PostPosted: Mon Dec 21, 2009 12:04 pm
your every ounce welcome but i wouldnt be praising you unless your good
and you are good  

Bryan Son of Wolf

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jacard

PostPosted: Mon Dec 21, 2009 12:27 pm
Bryan lopezexe
your every ounce welcome but i wouldnt be praising you unless your good
and you are good

that one, i only think is my thrid best. these two are my top favorites, and everyone elses top favorites as well:
TIME

I stand alone now…

Do you know I wait for you

It has been so long




I am sorry for the mistakes I have made…




The grass has grown since we have last been here…

Do you know that I am here?

The time still passes…

It has been so long…




I am sorry… am I to die for the mistakes I have made?




I stand here now…

Will you come back to me?

Will you sit with me again?

Will you lay your head on my shoulder again?

Can I stroke your hair again…?




I am so sorry…




Will you let me go back in time?

Will you let me take the pain away?

Will time keep us apart?




I am so sorry for the mistakes I have made…







Can I lay my hand upon your cheek again?

Will you let me protect you again?

Are you coming…?

It has been so long…




I am sorry… can you for give me?




Will time forgive me?




Do you know I am here…?

Time is all I have…

But it has been so long…




Will you let me go back in time?

Will you let me take the pain away?




I am sorry… will you come back to me?

TEARS:

I did not know angels can cry..
but still i see the red streaks of your tears

i know you try to hide!

You are so strong...
But still your face is burned red!

Why do you try to hide?

I see when your lip quivers
I see the water building up in your eyes...

Are angels alloud to cry?

i see your wings...
they change colours when you are sad..

You donot have to hide so much...

i know you are in pain...
i wish i could help

do not hide anymore!

I see the red streaks of tears that are burned into your cheek...
And now i know...

Angels can cry..  
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