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Posted: Sun Dec 27, 2009 7:10 am
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Posted: Sun Dec 27, 2009 2:39 pm
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Posted: Mon Dec 28, 2009 2:52 pm
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Posted: Mon Dec 28, 2009 4:30 pm
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Protecter_Soul Ekeda Since when do "light" and "lie" rhyme? Or "city" and "can see"? Who said it had to rhyme? Given that the second two lines of each part rhyme, it seems as if it's supposed to have an AABB rhyme scheme. At the very least, it's implied.
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Posted: Mon Dec 28, 2009 6:08 pm
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Posted: Wed Dec 30, 2009 6:24 am
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Posted: Wed Dec 30, 2009 9:04 am
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Posted: Thu Dec 31, 2009 7:28 am
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Ekeda On This Night when your older you'll learn to rhyme with similar sounds and not just elementary school rhymes. Is this really a good time for personal attacks? On This Night i'll have it recorded next week. sometimes they dont appear as good without music. I suppose I'll have to hear it recorded in order for it to sound good to me. dont bash on advance rhyme schemes then
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Posted: Thu Dec 31, 2009 10:50 am
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On This Night Ekeda On This Night when your older you'll learn to rhyme with similar sounds and not just elementary school rhymes. Is this really a good time for personal attacks? On This Night i'll have it recorded next week. sometimes they dont appear as good without music. I suppose I'll have to hear it recorded in order for it to sound good to me. dont bash on advance rhyme schemes then If you answer my question, you'll look less like a pretentious jerk.
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