My Sailor Moon Story

[Moon Prince Endymion]

So I decided to write a story about what would happen if Chibiusa's children had to fight as senshi. I wrote from her son's point of view and so I here it is.

http://www.fanfiction.net/s/5624896/1/Age_of_The_Zodiac

I wrote in the chapter form so the link to the first chapter is up. ^_^

please tell me what you guys think about it and what you think I can do to improve either the story or my writing skills. ^_^  

[Moon Prince Endymion]

hello? Anybody?  

[Hidoide]

it's a good story, but u forgot to indent, cuz when a different person speaks...u indent to not confuse people.  

[Moon Prince Endymion]

Oh ok I'll make sure to check that before I post the next chapter since I don't think you can edit the text after it has been posted on the site. Then again I'm completely new to that site so a lot of things might have escaped my attention.