Watching with my eyes

[D-JAY-227]

I stay here lookin at you move on, n me staying behind, lookin at you find

love, and me being declined; My tears run down my face, while my heart

beats at a slow pace, sometimes i just wanna end it all, stabbing myself

against the wall..~1.27.10~  

[CrimsonsDecayingRose]

i like it; i'd work on some of the spelling ( i had to read it times to figure out the n.) so i'd put these marks (') around a word that is 'half-used' such as 'n'. but overall, i liked it. keep up the good work!!
~Crimson  

[D-JAY-227]

lol well that makes me feel smart but over all thanks lol n sorry i was like in a rush when i typedit lol