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 Posted: Wed Apr 24, 2013 8:55 pm
Chieftain Twilight ScarletFrost Chieftain Twilight ScarletFrost Wow, it's been a while. Anyway, I was just jotting ideas down for an RP concept that turned into my personal comic project, and here's something that came out and almost made me cry. ---------------------------------------------------------- But rest did not come. In her mind, Nixie was reliving one of the darkest days of her life. Austin had driven her home early from a cocktail party because she was nauseous. Sovenn had arrived by taxi hours later, so drunk he could hardly stand, and found them talking in the kitchen over a cup of tea. They both looked too happy to be innocent. Sovenn accused her of sleeping with the help, which she vehemently denied. He stormed up the stairs and she followed, still protesting her innocence. He spun around and hit her. She fell down nearly two flights of marble stairs. Austin caught her at the bottom. Austin dialed 911. Austin rode with her to the hospital. In the hospital, the doctor informed him that she had lost the baby in the fall. that last sentence hit home the hardest, I think. overall, the images evoked are captivating and heartbreaking. such violence, such drama, such tragedy.... The only thing is that the small snippet only tells half of the story. Austin is the chauffeur and very professional. Even so, he's the closest thing Nixie has to a best friend she has. Nixie is a mythological creature that due to the terms of her marriage and the binding nature of her species could never be unfaithful. Sovenn has no such compulsion. He's just an abusive a** and a control freak. aye, I gathered that about Sovenn... in context like that, it's even more chilling. sad I can see now why you cried -- not just because you wrote it so you feel deeper for it than I, but because it is not something one can contemplate or realy feel without being brought to tears. Now I just have to illustrate it in comic book form. Yippie.
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Posted: Wed Apr 24, 2013 9:01 pm
ScarletFrost Chieftain Twilight ScarletFrost Chieftain Twilight ScarletFrost Wow, it's been a while. Anyway, I was just jotting ideas down for an RP concept that turned into my personal comic project, and here's something that came out and almost made me cry. ---------------------------------------------------------- But rest did not come. In her mind, Nixie was reliving one of the darkest days of her life. Austin had driven her home early from a cocktail party because she was nauseous. Sovenn had arrived by taxi hours later, so drunk he could hardly stand, and found them talking in the kitchen over a cup of tea. They both looked too happy to be innocent. Sovenn accused her of sleeping with the help, which she vehemently denied. He stormed up the stairs and she followed, still protesting her innocence. He spun around and hit her. She fell down nearly two flights of marble stairs. Austin caught her at the bottom. Austin dialed 911. Austin rode with her to the hospital. In the hospital, the doctor informed him that she had lost the baby in the fall. that last sentence hit home the hardest, I think. overall, the images evoked are captivating and heartbreaking. such violence, such drama, such tragedy.... The only thing is that the small snippet only tells half of the story. Austin is the chauffeur and very professional. Even so, he's the closest thing Nixie has to a best friend she has. Nixie is a mythological creature that due to the terms of her marriage and the binding nature of her species could never be unfaithful. Sovenn has no such compulsion. He's just an abusive a** and a control freak. aye, I gathered that about Sovenn... in context like that, it's even more chilling. sad I can see now why you cried -- not just because you wrote it so you feel deeper for it than I, but because it is not something one can contemplate or realy feel without being brought to tears. Now I just have to illustrate it in comic book form. Yippie. is it bad I still wish to subject myself to the pain of seeing it just so I can appreciate the artistry?
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Chieftain Twilight Captain
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ScarletFrost Vice Captain
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Posted: Fri May 03, 2013 10:28 pm
Chieftain Twilight is it bad I still wish to subject myself to the pain of seeing it just so I can appreciate the artistry? Awww, thanks! I'm going to try to make this come out. I might only be updating it on DA, but I'll post the pages here too, if I can. smile
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Posted: Fri May 03, 2013 10:34 pm
ScarletFrost Chieftain Twilight is it bad I still wish to subject myself to the pain of seeing it just so I can appreciate the artistry? Awww, thanks! I'm going to try to make this come out. I might only be updating it on DA, but I'll post the pages here too, if I can. smile you are too epic for words, but since they are my chosen tools I will try.
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Chieftain Twilight Captain
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ScarletFrost Vice Captain
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Posted: Sat May 04, 2013 10:44 am
I've come to the decision that Hugh Jackman would make a really good Austin. cool Now to find a good face for Sovenn and a name for my villain.
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Posted: Sat May 04, 2013 1:10 pm
ScarletFrost I've come to the decision that Hugh Jackman would make a really good Austin. cool Now to find a good face for Sovenn and a name for my villain. good choice. do you want any suggestions or inspiration, or do you want to do it all yourself?
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Chieftain Twilight Captain
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Posted: Sat May 04, 2013 7:22 pm
Chieftain Twilight ScarletFrost I've come to the decision that Hugh Jackman would make a really good Austin. cool Now to find a good face for Sovenn and a name for my villain. good choice. do you want any suggestions or inspiration, or do you want to do it all yourself? How about feedback an opinions? I'm thinking a face similar to this for Sovenn, and I'm thinking of something like this for my villain, whose name is Cassius.
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Posted: Sun May 05, 2013 6:32 am
I actually judge my work by how much it chills me. If I'm not arroused or blushing by the time I'm finished writing a smut scene, then I go back and do it over. I do the same with action and sad scenes, but with anger and sadness respectively.
Actually, I need to get back to writing now... Bye guys!!
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Chieftain Twilight Captain
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Posted: Sun May 05, 2013 7:55 pm
ScarletFrost Chieftain Twilight ScarletFrost I've come to the decision that Hugh Jackman would make a really good Austin. cool Now to find a good face for Sovenn and a name for my villain. good choice. do you want any suggestions or inspiration, or do you want to do it all yourself? How about feedback an opinions? I'm thinking a face similar to this for Sovenn, and I'm thinking of something like this for my villain, whose name is Cassius. the face for Sovenn... I think you have the right idea with it, but personally I would choose either softer or more angular features, and make them sharper. his hair is just right, but the chin seem too flat, and the ears kind of creep me out... I almost imagine an elvish look when reading about him. maybe Orlando Bloom or Hugo Weaving? as for the villain guy, he seems perfect! O.O very obviously the villain. he has that brutish powerful build, those cold intelligent eyes and the very macho-masculine dominance-features, namely a full beard and skyclad top.
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Posted: Sun May 05, 2013 9:32 pm
Chieftain Twilight ScarletFrost Chieftain Twilight ScarletFrost I've come to the decision that Hugh Jackman would make a really good Austin. cool Now to find a good face for Sovenn and a name for my villain. good choice. do you want any suggestions or inspiration, or do you want to do it all yourself? How about feedback an opinions? I'm thinking a face similar to this for Sovenn, and I'm thinking of something like this for my villain, whose name is Cassius. the face for Sovenn... I think you have the right idea with it, but personally I would choose either softer or more angular features, and make them sharper. his hair is just right, but the chin seem too flat, and the ears kind of creep me out... I almost imagine an elvish look when reading about him. maybe Orlando Bloom or Hugo Weaving? as for the villain guy, he seems perfect! O.O very obviously the villain. he has that brutish powerful build, those cold intelligent eyes and the very macho-masculine dominance-features, namely a full beard and skyclad top. I was thinking of sort of a useless pretty-boy look. He's a royal a**, a vicious manipulator and a drunk, but he's not evil like Darth Vador or Hitler. And yay for the villain, he's a werewolf! cool A very arrogant, violent, hot-tempered, territorial werewolf who was humiliated. Delish, huh?
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ScarletFrost Vice Captain
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Posted: Sun May 05, 2013 9:41 pm
ScarletFrost Chieftain Twilight ScarletFrost Chieftain Twilight ScarletFrost I've come to the decision that Hugh Jackman would make a really good Austin. cool Now to find a good face for Sovenn and a name for my villain. good choice. do you want any suggestions or inspiration, or do you want to do it all yourself? How about feedback an opinions? I'm thinking a face similar to this for Sovenn, and I'm thinking of something like this for my villain, whose name is Cassius. the face for Sovenn... I think you have the right idea with it, but personally I would choose either softer or more angular features, and make them sharper. his hair is just right, but the chin seem too flat, and the ears kind of creep me out... I almost imagine an elvish look when reading about him. maybe Orlando Bloom or Hugo Weaving? as for the villain guy, he seems perfect! O.O very obviously the villain. he has that brutish powerful build, those cold intelligent eyes and the very macho-masculine dominance-features, namely a full beard and skyclad top. I was thinking of sort of a useless pretty-boy look. He's a royal a**, a vicious manipulator and a drunk, but he's not evil like Darth Vador or Hitler. And yay for the villain, he's a werewolf! cool A very arrogant, violent, hot-tempered, territorial werewolf who was humiliated. Delish, huh? oh yeh, definitely. whee and then you have the right look for Sovenn. but I wasn't picturing that when I read about him. meanwhile, who is that Jonstalker62 guy? o.O; I don't recognize that username. is it someone else who had their name changed, or did he get let in by crew? do we know if he's been checked out? you know I'm particular about my screening process...
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Posted: Sun May 05, 2013 9:51 pm
Chieftain Twilight ScarletFrost Chieftain Twilight ScarletFrost Chieftain Twilight xd good choice. do you want any suggestions or inspiration, or do you want to do it all yourself? How about feedback an opinions? I'm thinking a face similar to this for Sovenn, and I'm thinking of something like this for my villain, whose name is Cassius. the face for Sovenn... I think you have the right idea with it, but personally I would choose either softer or more angular features, and make them sharper. his hair is just right, but the chin seem too flat, and the ears kind of creep me out... I almost imagine an elvish look when reading about him. maybe Orlando Bloom or Hugo Weaving? as for the villain guy, he seems perfect! O.O very obviously the villain. he has that brutish powerful build, those cold intelligent eyes and the very macho-masculine dominance-features, namely a full beard and skyclad top. I was thinking of sort of a useless pretty-boy look. He's a royal a**, a vicious manipulator and a drunk, but he's not evil like Darth Vador or Hitler. And yay for the villain, he's a werewolf! cool A very arrogant, violent, hot-tempered, territorial werewolf who was humiliated. Delish, huh? oh yeh, definitely. whee and then you have the right look for Sovenn. but I wasn't picturing that when I read about him. meanwhile, who is that Jonstalker62 guy? o.O; I don't recognize that username. is it someone else who had their name changed, or did he get let in by crew? do we know if he's been checked out? you know I'm particular about my screening process... Do we have a "sandrock62"? Sovenn is not a pleasant guy, but he's not 1-dimensional, either. ^_^
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ScarletFrost Vice Captain
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Posted: Sun May 05, 2013 9:55 pm
ScarletFrost Chieftain Twilight ScarletFrost Chieftain Twilight ScarletFrost Chieftain Twilight xd good choice. do you want any suggestions or inspiration, or do you want to do it all yourself? How about feedback an opinions? I'm thinking a face similar to this for Sovenn, and I'm thinking of something like this for my villain, whose name is Cassius. the face for Sovenn... I think you have the right idea with it, but personally I would choose either softer or more angular features, and make them sharper. his hair is just right, but the chin seem too flat, and the ears kind of creep me out... I almost imagine an elvish look when reading about him. maybe Orlando Bloom or Hugo Weaving? as for the villain guy, he seems perfect! O.O very obviously the villain. he has that brutish powerful build, those cold intelligent eyes and the very macho-masculine dominance-features, namely a full beard and skyclad top. I was thinking of sort of a useless pretty-boy look. He's a royal a**, a vicious manipulator and a drunk, but he's not evil like Darth Vador or Hitler. And yay for the villain, he's a werewolf! cool A very arrogant, violent, hot-tempered, territorial werewolf who was humiliated. Delish, huh? oh yeh, definitely. whee and then you have the right look for Sovenn. but I wasn't picturing that when I read about him. meanwhile, who is that Jonstalker62 guy? o.O; I don't recognize that username. is it someone else who had their name changed, or did he get let in by crew? do we know if he's been checked out? you know I'm particular about my screening process... Do we have a "sandrock62"? Sovenn is not a pleasant guy, but he's not 1-dimensional, either. ^_^ seems like there is alot of broken glass to walk on in that story. and... I don't think so. confused I hope this doesn't turn into another october incident...
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Posted: Sun May 05, 2013 10:10 pm
Chieftain Twilight ScarletFrost Chieftain Twilight ScarletFrost Chieftain Twilight the face for Sovenn... I think you have the right idea with it, but personally I would choose either softer or more angular features, and make them sharper. his hair is just right, but the chin seem too flat, and the ears kind of creep me out... I almost imagine an elvish look when reading about him. maybe Orlando Bloom or Hugo Weaving? as for the villain guy, he seems perfect! O.O very obviously the villain. he has that brutish powerful build, those cold intelligent eyes and the very macho-masculine dominance-features, namely a full beard and skyclad top. I was thinking of sort of a useless pretty-boy look. He's a royal a**, a vicious manipulator and a drunk, but he's not evil like Darth Vador or Hitler. And yay for the villain, he's a werewolf! cool A very arrogant, violent, hot-tempered, territorial werewolf who was humiliated. Delish, huh? oh yeh, definitely. whee and then you have the right look for Sovenn. but I wasn't picturing that when I read about him. meanwhile, who is that Jonstalker62 guy? o.O; I don't recognize that username. is it someone else who had their name changed, or did he get let in by crew? do we know if he's been checked out? you know I'm particular about my screening process... Do we have a "sandrock62"? Sovenn is not a pleasant guy, but he's not 1-dimensional, either. ^_^ seems like there is alot of broken glass to walk on in that story. and... I don't think so. confused I hope this doesn't turn into another october incident... Lots of broken glass...and broken hearts...and broken crockery, windows, and walls. His profile seems congruent with an average RST member.
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Posted: Sun May 05, 2013 10:13 pm
ScarletFrost Chieftain Twilight ScarletFrost Chieftain Twilight ScarletFrost Chieftain Twilight the face for Sovenn... I think you have the right idea with it, but personally I would choose either softer or more angular features, and make them sharper. his hair is just right, but the chin seem too flat, and the ears kind of creep me out... I almost imagine an elvish look when reading about him. maybe Orlando Bloom or Hugo Weaving? as for the villain guy, he seems perfect! O.O very obviously the villain. he has that brutish powerful build, those cold intelligent eyes and the very macho-masculine dominance-features, namely a full beard and skyclad top. I was thinking of sort of a useless pretty-boy look. He's a royal a**, a vicious manipulator and a drunk, but he's not evil like Darth Vador or Hitler. And yay for the villain, he's a werewolf! cool A very arrogant, violent, hot-tempered, territorial werewolf who was humiliated. Delish, huh? oh yeh, definitely. whee and then you have the right look for Sovenn. but I wasn't picturing that when I read about him. meanwhile, who is that Jonstalker62 guy? o.O; I don't recognize that username. is it someone else who had their name changed, or did he get let in by crew? do we know if he's been checked out? you know I'm particular about my screening process... Do we have a "sandrock62"? Sovenn is not a pleasant guy, but he's not 1-dimensional, either. ^_^ seems like there is alot of broken glass to walk on in that story. and... I don't think so. confused I hope this doesn't turn into another october incident... Lots of broken glass...and broken hearts...and broken crockery, windows, and walls. His profile seems congruent with an average RST member. oh my. heh. xd and that is good. we'll leave him be but I'm gonna be keeping a close eye out.
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