Stephen(A Poem)

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Stephen

The sun shines off his bronze hair leaving me breathless and stunned
His intense,beautiful blue eyes bore into me, braking all my bariers
And his smile breaks my heart
He pretends I don't exist, killing me slowly
Yet I love him more each day

 

[Spastic waffles]

VERY minor detail:

barriers-two r's. XD told you it was minor.

Something I saw that is a bit hard to reconcile IMO is the eyes boring into you followed by pretending you don't exist...those two things just don't really work together. If he's pretending you don't exist his eyes wouldn't really bore into you...

I dunno. Perhaps I'm reading in just a bit too far?