Something I have been working on...

[ecopper12]

Hello. I haven't posted here in the longest time, probably because of my somewhat bad rep with Meta. I won't waste time on that, so I'll cut to the chase. I have been working on a History of Nintendo. It has been turning out quite well, even though I borrowed some info from different websites. I made it with the site I found while reading the Gaiaonline Magazine. Now, I wanted some feedback. I added a little audio treat, so be sure to have your speakers up.

Here it is!

So...Any suggestions or comments?  

[Paper Sonic]

Hey Copper. I dunno what's between you and Fish but it's probably nothing. Regardless, don't let that stop you from coming here. Also he isn't really around much.

Anyway, I'd like to give you feedback but the site doesn't load for me. It's probably just because I'm browsing on an iPhone. I'll get back to you for feedback XD  

[Waynebrizzle]

fish is a bully

an e-bully  

[Xilo The Odd]

Waynebrizzle

fish is a bully

an e-bully

with a tiny e-p***s  

[Skaeryll]

Xilo The Odd

Waynebrizzle

fish is a bully

an e-bully

with a tiny e-p***s

...and a big e-nose?  

[Meta_Fish]

I don't even remember you. But anyway, what you have is kinda neat, I suppose? You just need more of it. And you should probably cite your sources.