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silly Ally 1202

PostPosted: Wed Apr 14, 2010 4:38 pm
After Things Change and Beast Boy's heart break, we never knew what really happened for the teen titans. This is a few days after they took out that one morfing monster thing. If you don't like Rae/BB grouping then please don't diss on it.


Beast Boy's door opened with the usual mechanical zip. He stepped out and walked down to the 'living room'. Starfire was sipping mustard while watching Robin and Cyborg duke it out on their favorite video game. Everything looked the same but something was missing. He just couldn't put his finger on it. Hearing the door open Star looked over. "Oh, will you join the festivities Beast Boy?" she asked sweetly. Robin paused the game and turned around. "Oh, Beast Boy.... how's it goin?"
Beast Boy faked a smile. Suddenly he noticed something rather odd. "Is that Raven's?" he asked in a rather shocked voice. They all turned to see a hard leather book, dark brown with yellow aged pages. "Ya... where'd she go?" Robin said looking around. Beast Boy had a feeling he knew where she was. "I'll be right back..." he said as he walked back through the door.

Up on the roof there was another book. It was opened to the very begining and was laying on the ground. As Beast Boy bent down to pick it up he saw it was completely blank. He grabbed it with both hands, and was pulling it up when a bright light illuminated from it. He dropped it and sheilded his eyes when everything around him went completely black.

Beast Boy's eyes fluttered open and he sat up. He was in what looked like a castle's first hall. It was complete with marble everything, ceiling to floor windows, and draperies all over. It was dark though. Everything was black and violet, even the light coming from the windows were gray. "Uhh... Hello?" he called out. His voice rang off the walls, sending echoes of his mumbles through the entire place.

"Beast boy?" Came a firmiliar voice. He turned around to see Raven. She was standing on a grand double stair case, one hand resting on the hand rail the other near her heart. She was wearing a beautiful black gown that came off the shoulders and complimented her hour glass form. "Raven! What the? How in? Where!" he stuttered, half yelling.

She rushed down to see him. He saw that her hair was slightly up in a ribbon, her bangs hanging around her face. "Beast Boy, how did you get in here?" she asked, suprisingly soft. But he couldn't say anything. There was some one on the stair case where Raven had just stood. "Oh, so we have another visitor." Raven spun around, glaring at the dark figure. He was nothing more than a shadow, his eyes the only thing that wasn't black. They were red. "I'm the story teller, and you my friend are interupting" he added calmly. Suddenly, with out warning, he flew at them. Beast Boy covered his head and face. But soon found out he wasn't the target.

As he looked up, he saw that 'the story teller' had Raven. She was strugling like crazy, but didn't use her powers. Odd... he thought. But it didn't matter. He jumped up and ran at him. Beast Boy began to transform to a T-rex when he stopped. "My... powers." he gasped. The story teller chuckled. "As story teller I decide what's going to happen. So I've decided it's unfair to use your silly little talents." he said, "Also, your no longer a part of this story, tah tah" he added, waving with one hand and still holding the thrashing Raven with his other. Beast Boy started running up the stairs when a hidden force threw him back. He was pushed all the way back and out of the big front doors. They closed after him, and right before he threw himself at them. They wouldn't budge. "Raven..." he whispered as he knelt down, exhausted from all the excitement.


.... TO BE CONTINUED!!! ^_^  
PostPosted: Thu Apr 15, 2010 2:48 pm
nicely done!  

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silly Ally 1202

PostPosted: Sat Apr 17, 2010 12:07 pm
Beast Boy brought himself up to his feet. He took a look around. The place was easily described in one word. Depressing. All the trees were dead and the sky was gray. There didn't seem to be a sun either. A few yards away was what looked to be a stable. Even farther was a rather large bridge, made of round stones. Under it was a raging river, it's thunderous rapids white noise in Beast Boy's head. He turned back and pounded on the doors some more out of pure frustration. How on earth was he supposed to get it? As he stood there contemplating, something caught his eye. A balcony, it's open glass doors sending glares in his direction- even though there was no sun to create them. Weird... is this some sort of trick? he thought. It was a few stories up and a few yards away to his right.
He walked over to it untill he was right underneath it. There were curtains dramatically billowing out of the double doors. The curtains, like everything else, were black. Beast Boy stared up at them, feeling hopeless. Right as he was turning to search for another way something fluttered past his face. He turned in time to see a butterfly lazily flying towards the building. It was too black and purple, but had a beauty about it that made Beast Boy follow it. It brushed past the corner of the building and he mindlessly chased it. After a minute it landed on the handle of what looked to be a storage shed. He opened it and smiled. The only thing in there was a ladder. Totally a trap, but I need to help Raven. he thought with finality.

Raven kicked and punched, but no matter what she did the story teller just chuckled. "Fighting isn't going to help you dear princess." he said in an amused voice. She stopped and turned the best she could to look at him. "Princess?" she said, confused. He chuckled again and stated rather smugly "Of course, why else would you be in my castle. Or even my story?"
He walked to the end of the hall he had been dragging Raven through and opened a door. "Now be a good little girl and go along with the story." he said, throwing her in. Raven hit the floor with a thud, and he too stepped inside.
She stood up and swung a punch at him. But he made a distinctive "Tsk tsk" noise and grabbed her fist. "That's not very lady like" he said, bending her hand backward. She fell from the pain. He was oddly very strong. The story teller suddenly lifted her up, one hand on her bisept. He dragged her over to an overlooked bed. It was colored as the rest of the castle. He threw her again and walked over to the door. "Have an apple if you feal the need." he said as he walked out and locked the door behind him. Raven looked down at the night stand next to the bed. It had a small bowl filled with apples. She had a strange moment of deja-vou but picked one up any way.

Beast Boy heaved himself over the edge of the balcony gaurd rail and hit the floor on his shoulder. He stifled an 'oww' and walked inside. It was as dark as all the rest with the same creepy set of colors. There was no furniture, except for a little table in the middle of the tight space. It had a mirror on it with a glass case that held a rose. As he aproached it, he saw the flower was wilting. There was also a note tied to the bottom of the mirror. It read- who?
"Hmm.... who?" he mumbled to himself. He stared at his reflection in the little mirror. It looked old and had a decorative frame. On the very top left side was a crack. I wonder.... he thought. "Umm, Raven" he said with uncertanty. His image was disoriented and swirled about, until it showed the face of non other that Raven. But it wasn't normal, she was sleeping.
"Good job". Beast Boy jerked his head up. By the door way, leaning on the frame, was the story teller, his smoky black arms folded. His frightening red eyes on Beast Boy. It made him shiver. "Where is she!" he yelled, dropping the mirror. The picture of Raven shattered.
"She's.... resting" he chuckled yet again. Beast Boy growled as only he could. He ran at him, but fell. He looked back to see what had tripped him. But there was nothing. "As I said before, I want you out of my story" he said. The story teller started walking towards him, but stopped. His red eyes went wide. Some unseen wall was seperating them, only by inches. "I'll stop you during the climax" he said, disinigrating. A fog of black that had been the story teller blew out the window and out of sight. Beast Boy stood up and ran out the door.

After almost half an hour of searching and almost locking himself in a bathroom, Beast Boy walked into a room at the end of a long hall. It looked no different from all the rest, except for the sleeping figure on the bed. He ran up next to Raven and grabbed her shoulders. "Raven! Wake up!" he said urgently shaking her. But she didn't move. He looked around for something to help him. There wasn't anything but an apple with a bite in it. There was a slight wind gust and the window opened. The lonely butterfly drifted in, fluttering over to the bed. It landed on Beast Boy's hand. He suddenly knew what to do.


-TO BE CONTINUED ^_^  
PostPosted: Wed Apr 21, 2010 12:07 pm
Hmmm... It seems a bit confusing to me, but I assume in later chapters more will be explained. I noticed a few horrible misspelled words, but other than that your spelling/grammar was alright. So far you get 6/10. A little better than average to me.  

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