My Pieces

[ArkAngell4Life]

Hiya you can call me Isaura, Saura or Jenna

These are just poems I've written over the years. Feedback would be great. Positive or negative, just be honest. I swear I can take it. And if they seem a little dark, or as some would say, 'emo', just understand that the last three to four years have been really hard on me, and upon request I do not mind posting the autobiography I have written on the matter.

 

[ArkAngell4Life]

This is possibly my favorite, as well as the oldest poem I still have. It is about a friend I had fallen really hard for. Nothing ever happened between us, but that is a different matter and to this day we are still friends.

In Your Arms.

To Nathane


Feeling safe in your arms
All my problems melt away
And I begin to wonder
What it would be like
If you chose not to stay
If you choose to leave me
The way you do everyday
This short embrace
It's tight, sharp grasp
Though it shoots pain
Through every nerve in my body
I still wish it to NEVER end
The pain will seem to fade
But the feeling never will
Because you're here with me
But it you choose to leave
I don't know
What I would do
I wish you could see through my friendliness
And see how I truly feel
Because, not far from the surface
I really like you  

[daddylatrell]

Aww, so touching!
I love the descriptive words.
It creates great imagery.
A job well done Ark! 4laugh

 

[ada9]

awww..

.that is so beauuutiful, i really get how you feel in this poem. It actually good...good job