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Lord Redtail Rathan

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PostPosted: Mon Apr 26, 2010 5:43 am
A/N: How I told her I love her for the first time.

Ashley

Piercing blue eyes, like the deep sea.
Hair, golden as the sun rises in the morning.
Lips like rubies, yet soft as silk.
All of these things drive me wild.
Yet there is one thing above all else,
One thing that makes me care for you so.
And that is your loving heart.
For that is what makes you truly beautiful.
It is not just the outside, but the inside as well.
And for that, I am truly blessed to have you.
And to have your love. And with that I say,
Hey beautiful. I love you.

-For Ashley

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PostPosted: Mon Apr 26, 2010 12:06 pm
Nice similies!
I especially like "Lips like rubies, yet soft as silk."
I haven't heard that one before!
Job well done!
 

daddylatrell
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clm640
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PostPosted: Mon Apr 26, 2010 4:46 pm
It's beautiful! I absolutely love it. Ashley must be one lucky girl.  
PostPosted: Mon Apr 26, 2010 6:44 pm
Hehe. I wish i could have taken a picture of the smile on her face when she read it...  

Lord Redtail Rathan

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